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“O’sorrow. You see, I have ended, by respecting you, because I am certain you will never leave me”

I loved it to be honest.  I personally liked the artwork and expressions.

Really good. I tried to go for a second run where I'm cruel after I hit the end, Couldn't really finish cause I can't bring myself to be mean to Arthur. 

Woah this is great. I remember when it was really short before. It's like watching a child grow up to become a adult in control of their life.

Really cool game, wish it did have more endings or paths for some more explanation.

Perhaps a choice to not hide or run away. It'd be cool to have an ending where you help people and decrease the amount of people that go missing. Anyways the atmosphere feels really nice, anxiety inducing but honestly it feels like a nice cool morning. Maybe because of it being black and white though. 

Anyways would love to see more.

Looks real good. I like seeing the progress the game is having.

Normally for digital drawing I use an app called Autodesk sketchbook, I've never really drawn on laptop before other than Piskel. I don't use it much anymore as my stylus broke. Might buy another one soon.

I'll try to keep making comments and stuff to keep you motivated since this game looks like it'll be fun in the future.

nice.

Pretty interesting. Has some potential.

I think having a background that changes per scene would be pretty interesting, it makes it feel impactful than a black screen. Special effects like falling rain or snow would also be pretty good as well. Music is probably a must.

I'm not sure if this game will have images but having a couple artworks for some important characters might help.

The choices could look a bit better, they look somewhat bland. Maybe have them become somewhat bigger when your curser goes over them.

Pretty dang good. I was pretty confused and thought I was done for, but I wasn't. Tried to avoid sacrificing important things but eventually you have to. At least I got to save the crystals from her mom. Sad but good.

Love using Enyra

Alright so, after getting to day 106 this game was fun. Not much story so story wise, somewhat weak.

I grinded and got every stats to max which was nice to look at, however might deter people. I got over 10000 coins at the end which was nice to look at. I finished all 3 paths for the girls, it was nice.

However a couple problems I'd like to point out. Lyrae doesn't have text when you speak with her, easy fix so no too big of a deal if you didn't spend hours on the game. Each confession is rather boring, only Sylvia seems better than the rest but isn't even that good. It's just one line of dialogue or nothing with Lyrae.

No endings, I personally would like a heartfelt ending for each girl and possibly a harem ending. Not just a single piece of text. You've also got the class glitches, that's a bit annoying, added extra time to me grinding. It was fun and I haven't played light novels many times so I might be biased. If it had more story I'd play more.

Either way I completely sucked the game dry out of it's contents and felt rather empty. Personally if someone plays the game I'd recommend only going for one girl and waiting for updates. Course even then still dry ending but a update will probably help. I had a good experience somewhat but not much at the end.

Thank you for making this game. I hope to enjoy a finished and much more fun to play game in the future! (P.S barely played firefly game, don't know how it works.)