Pretty interesting. Has some potential.
I think having a background that changes per scene would be pretty interesting, it makes it feel impactful than a black screen. Special effects like falling rain or snow would also be pretty good as well. Music is probably a must.
I'm not sure if this game will have images but having a couple artworks for some important characters might help.
The choices could look a bit better, they look somewhat bland. Maybe have them become somewhat bigger when your curser goes over them.