augh. GRIPS YOU. i sniffled and i was sore, sobbed until i didnt kara bout the snot on my face anymore. i am already weak for star and space motifs but everything just rdsnjsjnsnj SNORFS. i literally can't english rn i had so many mixed feelings, but not necessarily in a bad way i just. POUNDS FIST on the table. kicking my itty bitty feet against the bed. i felt stillness and then i felt shaken. and then. i felt nothing, and then felt everything. i went through each line of text with anticipation and my eyes sparkled at the art both because it was glimmery but also cuz i couldnt stop frikin tearing up. i didn't want it to be over and i felt the tenderness seep back into me. a feeling that maybe love can still exist in its own twisted way, and i already knew from the point where ros and vash met hearts for the first time that my own would break. i didn't feel ready to close the window. i felt the longing in my heart race again. and all i could think of was. what's next? and maybe, even if this was just a demo. even though it's still in dev. would i be longing no matter what? i just don't want to say goodbye to love, and i don't want to say goodbye to vash or ros either. just thank you.
ahhhhh i got so invested and suddenly its over /lh
i am already attached to the characters, and the way i felt i could relate a bit to each one didn't help haha! for a demo these characters already feel so fleshed out and familiar by the end, the interactions feel natural and i am left anticipating. the way you formatted the text and the way it was written, u really have a knack for conveying tone through writing. i could really feel limno's anxiety, i felt like i was being smacked by it. i also love how well the music and sound go with the artwork, it's like they were made for each other (in a seams and senses sort of way). so awesome!!!! ty for making this, i am grinning and chet is baby :)
art is really swag, i like the casual and mundane atmosphere. even the side characters have a charm to them, it feels natural. i like how you capture different personalities through your writing, it's like you can write with many voices. charming read, good luck on updates :)
wow, i'm going to preface this by saying i am someone who is not familiar with the concept of "dolls" and "dollhood", so this is coming from an outsider just trying their best to understand by looking into a window. i went into this with an open mind, trying to learn the nuances of it all but i was confused, jarred at first, even. i loved how humanistic garbage was even as a doll. and even when the subject matter became abhorrent and dark, you still captured each character realistically and flawed. i don't know how but i didn't 100% condemn multiple bad actors by the end of the story, but maybe i am just speaking as someone who has experienced the pain as well, and as someone who believes in redemption, as someone who was caught in the cycle and almost perpetuated it. thank you so much for making this. it is very provocative, and while i don't completely get it. i'm writing this in tears but also laughter. feeling both joy and pain, and reclaiming a sense of myself. thank you garbage doll.
augh, i just really love this piece. i'm not rly sure how to convey what i felt in words but i like how it plays into tropes about mermaids but also uses subversion to drive the narrative further. you have an idea of what's going to happen, but there's still an element of surprise. the writing style is beautiful and very delicate in its descriptiveness. on top of that, i adore the art and heart put into this. i find it so haunting and equal parts toxic that they both found each other irresistible, but there was still an uneven dynamic still present. spoilers but wanted to comment: in a weird way, they become equals in the end. but the cycle perpetuates. the implications of the ending is striking, even with its subtlety. the protagonist is already someone isolated, but somehow becomes even more isolated by the end. but at that point it doesn't matter, because her life was upended. and honestly she may not even care anymore. things are more exciting.. and gay hehe i don't know how you pulled that off in such a short time, but i applaud you!! thank you for such a great read :D
ahhh, so much love put into this work, this was absolutely gut-wrenching!! late comment, i just figured out how to write comments oops. your depiction of fairies is so magical but i like the interpretation of them being both frail and having great power, both in the context of working together and individual resilience and strength. i will say the adventurer's demeanor and treatment of the fairy is deeply horrendous and unsettling, it was really hard to read but it becomes clear how damaged the adventurer is and how the karmic cycle gets back at her :'O. my heart goes out to the fairy, i hope she reunites with her fairy gf or at least finds some semblance of peace!
please please check this vn out, dfhjdj i really really loved the art direction for this and how expressive both the characters and scenery were !! i am very shy to comment but i just wanted to say, i have such an appreciation for art that is curious and explorative in such a short amount of words. the art was visceral and really enhanced the reading experience. the setting is deeply intoxicating, and the chemistry between the two is woahhh!!! awesome awesome piece you've got here, really love it !!:D
