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The effort is amazing though! Also, the situation in Myanmar seems crazy, stay safe!

What I am saying is, naturally, you should write in a language you can properly write in. If he is not able to write a story in english, he should try it in his native language. If I was from Myanmar which I am guessing he his from because of the story. I would much rather have a novel in Burmese from a burmese creator than in halfassed english from a burmese creator. It is a waste of the skills he has with the renders and all if the lines are not enjoyable to read and are frustrating. I'm incredibly sorry if this hurt you but its the hard truth.

The grammar hurts my head. If you arent fluent in English, get someone who can translate it properly before making an english game ffs.