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Just finished reading it, I can't wait to see what else is going to happen. And I wish to know what happened to Emily!!

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AHHHH!

It's perfect. I can't wait to see when you fully release it. I like how you mixed different themes in both endings. I'm looking forward to Adam's story and how he became like this. I also wonder how her family and others are going to react to her injuries and if they'll believe her.

The Mac version did work so thank you.

Is a Mac version going to be available? I want to play it since I saw it earlier on Twitter. And it looks very promising.

What to say? Well, let me start off by saying I really enjoyed this story and I'm kinda like Astrid and don't like riddles since I'm kinda slow to connect dots, nonetheless, I  was able to solve them fairly easily and used my brain for the first time since I was born. 

The storyline and the way you wrote the characters had me engaged the entire time. You truly gave life or death to the characters. The solo route had me in tears, I hadn't even realized I was crying when she got reunited with her bf. I kinda expected us to have a preview of all the couples after they make it in the end. Each route had me itching to know what was going to happen next. 

I do have some questions if you don't mind.

Is there gonna be a route for the guide? If so, I wonder how it's gonna play out considering he might be old or maybe not even a being who can display the affections Astrid would want.

Will you ever show an after-ending? I kinda wonder if the couples stayed together after or if they run into her bf when she's alive because that'd be awkward.

My last question is about the shadows. I noticed in one of your posts that you will be adding more stuff to this. Are we ever going to see how Smiley or Ezrebeth look? Or will that just stay that way as part of the mystery? Anyways, this was a pretty long post but I really enjoyed the story and how fleshed out the characters were.  

1. Which character was your favorite? Why?
   1. I've only played Luca so far. He was just too cute to tease in the game.
2. Did you manage to make all the guys on the main screen regain their color?
   1. Not yet, I had my own Luca and Mark for a while, although I hadn't realized Mark wasn't a love interest until after I started playing the game.
3. What's your favorite moment in the game?
   1. My favorite moment was when they first met up.
4. Do you want a Mark route?
   1. I DO want a Mark route! I'm interested in his storyline. When I saw him in Luca's storyline I wanted to ditch Luca and go with him but I didn't.
5. Would you replay the game if it were fully voiced?
   1. I don't mind if it's fully voiced. I'm okay with either. But I am a fast and impatient reader so sometimes I'm just left waiting for the next dialogue or just skipping through. I did enjoy the noises they make like the sighs. It helped immerse me in the game. I loved the voice of both Mark and Luca!

Okay, some personal comments, I enjoyed the storyline and how different choices led to different endings. All the characters were beautifully drawn. I loved how the in-game texting featured worked and that I was able to scroll back on the texts. It really felt real. Plus, the MC's personality kinda resembled mine in some ways so I was able to relate to the MC and her choices. I really enjoyed the game!