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Are you ever going to actually complete this one? I'd love more of Evan's cuteness, and to see him more fleshed out in story. Please come back and do more with this one!

Yay! 

Also, from what I have seen on itch, they have only removed the paid NSFW content. Pwyw and donations are still open and allowed, but strict selling games are gone. Interloper is back up on the site through the search, but keep in mind, that may not stay forever. Save the game in collections, download the game...join the discord for links and information.

Please, I worked hard on the server. If you are unable to get access, just accept the terms, and I'll add permissions manually.

I'm missing 3 for Kirik and the last one for Anoam. I have the others, but completely forgot to go with Kirik and get those scenes.

There is another section. Go to roles and check it out. The server uses the autorole bot to hand out roles, but I'll pass ya a role

Not just bug reports or the like, but if you would like to show support for the project, the great creative design by Red Levity, be sure to join the discord!

Well, from what creator has said, as you can see, we might when the break is over.

Sent. And as soon as I get the server all set up with channels and everything, I'll make you owner and remove moderation from myself so and help you learn how to change server roles. ^^

Excellent to hear. Let me know if you want me to make a discord server for Interloper. I'll gladly do so for ya ^_^

BTW, how goes the finishing of Chapter 2? I'm eager to finally see Sam in that cute pose where his sheath just barely peeks out of his pants against his belly. That's adorable, but super sexy as well.

3 chapters in. Time for a quick review (will update when more chapters are avail):

First off, phenomenal work once more. I loved the change you guys made with the mouth animations. More motions instead of the singular motion from EfV. Great choice there, it adds more life to the characters.

This new cast will take some getting used to, but I like the plot so far; at least what I can garner as the plot. Ian is the son of a spy, who doesn't tell him everything. He tried to make friends, but once they knew who he was, they stopped being real friends, and became scared of him. Everyone treated him differently, and it messed with his perceptions. He just wants friends who don't care about who his family is, don't fear him or his name, and respect him for who HE is, which is where Ruke comes in.

I suspect Ruke has known Ian for a while, by the way they talk to each other. Ruke makes sure that Ian knows he doesn't care, he likes Ian.

I am sending a turmoil if emotions inside Ian when it comes to Zatch. He wants to like the Todd, but ...doesn't know how to deliver the words to the fox.

Thrax is an ass. Agree, but, I sense something underneath that hard exterior from the dragon. I think he secretly has feelings for Ian, but won't express them.

All in all, you guys are once again crushing it. Another stellar creation in just 3 chapters. The cliffhangers are perfectly placed and timed, set in locations that absolutely leave you wanting more.

I wholly recommend this, even if you haven't read EfV. You might be a little confused, readers, if you haven't read Echos of Valeth, but it's not so strictly a sequel to that one, that you are required to read it 

Also, on a side note, do you have a discord for Interloper? That might be a nice place to collect some ideas and a little help with the project. Just a thought, considering the fan base you have built up here on itch.io

I'm glad it helps you out and criticism is needed to improve. I even love the song "Submerged" that you made for chapter 2.

Also, Sam is fucking sexy as hell.

I want more! I am in love with this story. Both routes at the Goat's hut gave so many options. This is equal parts a romance and horror, and I think you hit both on the head. 

As stated in a comment below this one, You (The main character) are a bit too horny with comments, and while comedy is good in keeping the mind from reeling into insanity and helping to keep a firm ground under the feet, it feels...a little too forced and obfuscating(bewildering). The psychedelic scene gave me a good idea of what it is like to be drugged, even though I never want to experience that personally.

I do suggest putting a content warning in the game for the rape scene, or at least having the option to remove it if people don't want to see it in the options. But i feel it's placed well, and doesn't overstay it's welcome too long.

I cannot wait for the next update for chapter two to finish out so we can see chapter three. I figure you might be just one person working on a passion project, but you are doing an amazing job.

And I leave with a singular question about Sam: Are all his sprites and animations done with motion capture? He looks like vtuber model.

There is one singular question I want to know. I have to know...

Is Erianor okay?

My heart bleeds for Gwin. I loved how you told a deep seated story that plagues all orphans. The pain they go through, the suffering, and anxiety. From the moment they arrive in orphanages, through eighteen years of aging, to trying to find their place in the world.

In addition, you managed to capture what it's like being the orphan nobody wanted, no family would adopt, forced to watch time, after time, after time as all the other kids are adopted out into loving and caring families. And you still brought tears to my eyes.

Each chapter of this novel was designed in such a way that left me wanting more. I could not put this down, and my heart still begs for an answer regarding Erianor's fate, if we will see more of him, and if he will return to his hybrid. What will happen to Gwin? What was the details of Erianor's mission? Why doesn't Greycom know anything about Erianor's location, situation, or status? WHERE IN DANTE'S NINE HELLS IS THAT DAMNED WOLF?!

You have done a magnificent job on this visual novel. You have my rapt, and utmost attention with these projects of yours. Keep up the very excellent work. I will be following your stories and depictions very closely.