Thanks for playing our game! We hope you enjoyed it, even with the tense choices! :)
Melancholy3004
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The writing is well done, and the bear is super cute!
I think you could speed up the delivery of the writing (it was far too slow for my natural reading speed), and a more sedate music track would probably add to the vibe.
I enjoyed chasing the little monsters across the pages, but I agree that some more variation would add to the game :) Maybe you could change the size of the creatures and their speeds?
Wow, the art for this is gorrrgeeousss!! I did love the stickers that pop up around the screen, but I would have also liked to have seen more variation in Gloomy and Girly's expressions. The one CG where they're together was super nice.
I think you could cut the script to make the story a bit snappier, but the story itself is cute, girly, and enjoyable <3
Loooove the art in this!
The pong game was really satisfying, and I also enjoyed the flower collecting with the cow! That game in particular is beautifully drawn.
I struggled to figure out the pacman-esque game was controlled with the arrow keys, and I never figured out how to play the underwater game (enjoyed looking at it though).
Overall, very cute game <3
Game's artist here! Glad you enjoyed our game!
I believe that is indeed the end of at least one of the runs, but I think we could make the game-end state clearer. Thank you for your feedback!
P.S. Our writer is currently travelling and can't personally reply to all of the love for the script, but I'm sharing these comments with them :)
The art was fun to look at! There are some... unsettling elements... like I couldn't figure out how to close the game, and had to force close it. I made quite a few of the bubus sick... oopsie.
A royalty-free music track would probably add a lot to the ambience, if you're planning to make changes for round 2?






