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Shockingly I do know what demos are, I also have played all their games. It's important to give critiques so they actually know what to what the may need to rework or consider rather than just blind adoration and saying it's perfect.  Usually for a demo, you're showing what you've finished so far and sometimes will be in the finished product.  What they finished so far is awesome but I do have concerns about the lack of options and that being a possible reflection of what to expect for the rest of the gameplay upon completion. 

If we say 'YES THIS IS PERFECT NO NOTES' then there's a chance that they won't realize or consider that the roleplay aspect of the game isn't to the potential of their first one. That's why it's a demo no? For players to play and give actual feedback so they can think about what to work on or make sure they're going in the right direction. It's not an attack on them, I know what they can do and they can make great games! Player feedback is not a bad thing.

Liked it so far! But I ran into an issue where the game despite being male started calling mc queen instead of king!

Liked it so far, but the choices feel incomplete and lacking. Why am I clicking for one option 6 times in a row for one scene? It feels like you guys wanted an established character but also wanted to give players the sense that the character was their own? Which resulted in sense of lacking  in both aspects, I liked the doll customization and watching my little guy run around BUT if i had to choose between those mechanics or a more detailed dialogue that makes my character feel like my own or fully commit to having a completely established character, I'd choose the latter! 

I named my spring!mc cameron and now he and cameron are being absolute goofballs. They're like the heathers but instead with different levels golden retriever energy.

I love this game so far! I ran into the same glitches of summer and autumn being described as winter but other than that this is a really fun game! I love the writing and artstyle! Also the randomized results of same scenes is a really nice touch!

i am on my hands an knees HOW MUCH FIRE DO I NEED FOR ODDIE TO STOP FRYING MEEEE ;-;

im not a furry im not a furry, i tearfully whisper to myself while I play as a 6'2 teal wolf boy named delta and start writing a two page backstory for him

LOL  wonder who this mysterious masked stranger is, who has a perfectly circular head? Hmm.  It definitely isn't best boy shy guy (the dude in the hoodie who tries to ask MC out), he can do no wrong uvu  Right? Early game death is the best, it really makes you feel like all your choices matter!  Can't wait for day 2!

Oh cool! I respect that, passion projects are always my favorite ones because you can feel the excitement and love the creators put into it! That sound design was amazing, everything fell into place for the scares too! I'm on patreon so I'll def be watching! Can't wait to see what you guys do!

Love how my first try, I DIED fhkjfkeds

Love early game deaths, it takes away from the safety of 'oh this is just the start, no way i'll die right away' 

The pacing was great too! I really love what I'm seeing with this game. Do you guys happen to have a timeline for updates or when a full release will be done?

hold up, did you leave this comment because the creator doesn't like YBF?

edit: oh my god you did!! that's so embarrassing 

Hey, could you actually use your words to give a valid critique instead of being an asshole? This serves no other reason than to come off as hateful and rude. Like you say they never interact with anyone but what you wrote dead ass comes off as friendless behavior and like you're the teenager LOL

If you don't like it and have no real feedback to give then just idk go outside and touch grass. Don't be a dick online LOL

I think the game is great! I like the story and characters! I will voice one critique which is with the writing of the mc.

I played male and female for it to compare, and I did notice that rather than leaning for a more gender neutral mc/mc interactions. It does feel like you've written this only with a female mc or an mc who only has female parts in mind which does kinda take from the experience if you're cis male or a noncis female player (especially for the nsfw scene). Some fixes for this could simply some slight changes to dialogue. Like in the nsfw scene instead of 'cum on my dick' it could be 'cum on me baby'  another alteration could be adding a dress 'cool' option along with cute. These are just some suggestions to give it more of an inclusive feel for all genders/sexes! It's all good if you don't want to make changes like that, these are just some suggestions/critiques! Great vn other than that, I really enjoyed it.

I loved Royal alchemist so I'm sure Im gonna love this too! Expect a buy from me!

Like the others I agree the endings were a bummer. Tbh the only thing that made me feel like less bummed is knowing that Ash is going to be happy with David. I like to imagine that after the game is over he and David decided to leave LA to go somewhere else, I know in the og game that David is Luka's brother who became a blood pet of a vampire, so it's cool to imagine Ash and David going to Sanfran and running into Luka and then Luka realizing that David is either a vampire now or just genuinely happy to be with Ash--

I'm sorry I just really love David guys.

He just wants to be loved and darnit I'll support him in this endeavor!!!

;) I shall write fanfics for the occasion! (if that's okay once the game is out--)

Nice!! Can't wait to see more!  I'm sure I'll love the cutie to bits, right after I finish setting up Mars, no one has needed a wingman more.

Also ngl lowkey shipping Jack and Dietrich, I love some rat man/big puppy dynamic!

Playing the game! Heads up for dietrich route there's an error with the text after he feeds you 'just because he feeds his me"! I'll keep on the look out for any more errors!

None so far on Jack's route! Excited for fae and Alistair! Sad no tempo tho :cc He is a cutie!

I loved the demo! It's really refreshing to see a game that can double as an otome or BL game and I love that all the choices seem to have meaning! Cove is already my favorite character and I look forward to game's release!

I was curious since you can choose your pronouns will there be any slight difference between the male and female one when interacting with characters like an example being a guy who is a real ladies man will try to flirt with you when you have female pronouns but not when you have male?

This won't change if I'm going to support you on your patreon or buy the game either way (I'm doing both for sure once the 3rd comes for patreon) as I know that would be quite a bit of extra writing! I was just curious if that was something your team was thinking of!

I'm sure I'm gonna love seeing Moocha interact with everyone! I think I love him so much because he reminded me of Shuu at first.

Also I noticed you talking about tops not 'acting like tops' and bottoms not 'acting like bottoms' in a different comment AND I AGREE 10/10 Tops don't always need to 'look like tops' and bottoms don't always need to 'look like bottoms'! Like one of my favorite things about Seiyuu danshi was customizing the cast to fit my taste which is usually small not typically manly tops with taller more masculine looking bottoms. I def don't dislike the stereotype but the world is filled with different types of people who enjoy being tops and bottoms

You can bet cash money if cotton is an option I will be having him top Ban and when I eventually write up a fanmade sex scene/fanfiction(if that's cool) Moocha!

also is it bad that I'm kind of shipping Yolkie/Moocha and Cotton/Moocha already?? I get the feeling i'm going to love their interactions!

My friends and I are so excited for this game!!! Moocha is so cute!! I loved Seiyuu danshi, its not everyday that I can be a short top or a tall bottom!! That's one of my favorite dynamics but most games seem to never do that, so it's really great to have a game where that's possible!

You can def count on me for kickstarter and preorder!

I LOVE IT!!! I did notice with toma that there was a line where it seemed like you guys forgot an 'I' when he said 'won't let anything happen'--

Can't wait to play the full version!

Thank you very much! i really appreciate the quick response and resource! I hope to play it soon! Again, thank you for responding to my message quickly, I really appreciate knowing that it's happening to others too because if it was just me it'd mean its probably time to replace my old computer and that 13-1500 price tag is no easy payment! I hope to play your game soon! (if i dont botch the emulator process)

If it's any help, my mac is a late 2013 macbook pro! I will say that I've never run into an issue running games from here on it before, I tried deleting the files and re-downloading  it but i get the same issue, after i grant permission it'll show up on my dashboard before just closing itself, I never see the start screen or anything.

Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I have a mac and when I downloaded the game it would not open! idk if anyone else had this issue or if my old girl is just finally giving out but I figured I should let you know!

Great thanks! -silently prays for Hyde to be a neko- The demo was fun and I love the attention to detail, like when you use wind magic the guard never gets his helmet back-- Great touch! I can't wait for the full release!

Oh awesome! I've seen some games where the protag switches depending on who's route you're on or you can choose, will either of those be in this game or is the protagonist set as one role when r18 things happens? (loved the demo, im torn between Hyde and Karyl)

I got this too! it's a bummer because i wanna play but i cant play if i can't save!