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2-5 '94 was really good, well crafted metaphors about the relationship that made the time come alive for someone who never experienced it. Beautiful work.
It really is all fucking baseball.

You know from the moment that Snowy shows up just what sort of influence it will have from that body shape and too cute perception, and it makes sure to deliver. It felt like a break from reality, the way that time seems to no longer exist at some point where 15 years is simply a repitition of patterns that have somehow made a person, and everything that a failure to grow brings.

Fun porn, with social commentary, and also one that I had a lot of fun without outside of those.
Pictures might give some people motion blur when they move though.

I really enjoyed this one, both from the mix of horror and erotic parts in the different paths, and from the way it uses the relationship to enforce these positions.

There is no difference between horror and erotica, nor should there be.

Really good style through it, especially with the use of colors and shapes going on. I enjoyed a lot of the scenes, but did have some issues following how it happened across time, not related to it being non-chronological but rather how it was difficult to feel the passage between a lot of the different sections. I do think it still works though, but get's held up by many specific scenes above all else.

I really enjoyed this one~
Setting works well to help the predicament point home, especially with the lines. Additionally, character's do a good job of making their points land home for  you to understand the differences between their position in the structures created.

Fun read~
Maybe the real secret to solving relationship issues is worming someone and letting them figure it out that way.

I really enjoyed this, the art especially had a charming touch with how the different elements of paper drawings were included in sections like the background. Overall, while I was wanting more ways to understand the relationship between Eva and Mary, the humor and drama of the situation was still very gripping and very enjoyable!

Magical work with the images, 100% worth a play, maybe even a couple ones to drink it all in.

Really enjoyed the metaphor here, especially how it was constructed. While it is very short, lines were chosen exquisitely to cut away the exact image that was intended.

I really loved playing this, should have read it a long time ago.
Outside of the atmosphere, there's also the way that it builds a world and creates the distinctions about what different roles are that makes it hit like a truck when it tries to make it land. Very simplistic writing, but it is used to hit effective as hell.

Bunger!

Damn I loved the ways that Alpha's own assumptions about herself were slowly revealed to be nothing more than just just having the ability to not deal with those issues in that way from being an alpha. She isn't special for it, she's just another alpha. Similarly the way their dynamic worked the whole time helped perfectly to underline how they approach this differently. For Omega (The clearly superior girl and would make an excellent date partner) it's an act of reversal, while for the Alpha it's a series of ways to maintain the system. The sex and violence were mixed perfectly together to make them both play into each other until there wasn't really a difference and I loved every second of it.

Short but fun read! All the pieces fit smoothly together in a tense relationship that really hits home just how much harm's getting done. Moira and Valerie work really well together, and the Vampire Hunters really do act as a good organization of their own seperate from the police, it really brought to mind the people I know who work in weapons manufactoring or surveilence construction even if that's 'immoral' because it helps them get by. Vampires really did a good job of not being a metaphor.
Plus the designs were cute. 

For that definitely, even if it isn't necessarily tf/tf.

It isn't exclusively transfem/transfem but it plays a large role in the story!

Just a warning, this comment has some spoilers.

Let's go to Heaven was honestly an amazing read. Even from the start language is used masterfully to evoke a specific type of feeling while still actually making the actual words make sense. That is honestly, way harder to do then it sounds and definently harder then you've made it look here. The way sex is described, does an amazing job of both being actually erotic and feeling so hollow that you know that Deimos is basically unable to get into it. This also ends up playing into how they become gods really nicely, with Deimos going from feeling like someone who's bored and hollow to someone who has basically no will for herself. It's fascinating to see how that makes her puppetted by someone else's desires even while she is disgusted by them. This is especially noticable after going through it a second time to find that there was no changes no matter what you choose, even when they were meaningfully different.||

I think for main criticisms, a ton of energy is spent building it up so that the whole piece has a certain feel but most of that is done for setting the tone. After that's been done, that sort of eerie feeling where nothing is quite grounded ||Is really only dropped off at the very end. While that is a nice touch, it leads to there being a lot of emotional points that feel very similarly because they're all in the same soup. Stuff like panic, apathy, desire, and disgust all have a similar feeling throughout, and it'd been nice if there was a bit more distinction to each of them.||

That being said, one of my two favorites at the moment. I really liked the characters here, they played together really nicely and that's on top of the use of language.

This was great, Emily is honestly someone I really love here. She's both someone that you get to see her thought process enough that at some point it kind of feels justified, but also know that it can't work how she wants to. It just can't.

This is fantastic, slowly crushes you with the weight of the tide and worms it's way in to drag you with it. The characters feel like their ready to drag you into this mess, and it's amazing every second of it.

Thanks for making this! Are you planning on continuing to work on it?