I really enjoyed this, the art especially had a charming touch with how the different elements of paper drawings were included in sections like the background. Overall, while I was wanting more ways to understand the relationship between Eva and Mary, the humor and drama of the situation was still very gripping and very enjoyable!
thank you :)
The choice with the art meant a lot to me, despite starting with some basic and clean art, I realised that it didn't mean anything to the story. It didn't mean anything to me!
the rough style is as much a part of the story as the words are, at least to me.
p.s - like I wrote at the end, the story is much fuller than this! I just knew that I couldn't get it all in for the jam- a real shame but necessary