I really love the writing sounds in the beginning. They are so relaxing and made the narration engaging, so it’s easy to pay attention. The art is beautiful, and the pixelation almost gives it a watercolour feel with the colours! I was a bit confused at first about what to do or how to fight off the warriors, but overall, I really enjoyed the art and the gameplay. I think a short tutorial could help, and maybe adding labels to the cards or items in the shop/bag icon, since I couldn't really tell what the items were from the images. Overall, I really enjoyed both the art and the gameplay!
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I like the artwork! I thought the controls were a bit hard to get accurate. I tried really hard to loop around the snowman, but I couldn’t quite get used to them since it all depended on my left hand. Maybe adding an option to use the WASD keys as well could help, so players can choose to use either the arrow keys, WASD, or both. I also like that the dropped objects give more points, which makes it easier to reach the next level.
The concept is really unique, I don’t think I’ve seen a game that uses animation loops like this before! One suggestion would be to maybe add checkpoints at certain areas, as I did die a few times:,). I also forgot that Tab was used to close the animation screen, so I had to restart from the beginning. I think it’s really creative to use the animation sprites. I do think the game could be adjusted so the animation sprite order isn't given away right away, and I could also see a puzzle being made from it. I really like the concept, and the art is great too!
Nice concept! I think adding some different obstacles or syncing the movements with a music rhythm could make the gameplay more engaging and it would be great to have a height indicator so players know how close they are to earning a new wristband. I thought that your idea of adding campsites when earning wristbands would be really cool. Good job!
I love the artwork! The frog is so cute, and I really like the gradient background. At first, I thought the moving yellow loop icon was a banana. I was also a bit confused about whether we could do anything with the flies. In the third room, one fly would turn blue, but I wasn’t sure if that meant anything. Additionally, when I got all four loops, I wasn’t sure if that was the end since there was no ending screen. But overall, I really enjoyed playing it!
I liked the art. I was a bit confused at first because I thought we had to create a closed loop with the ends touching, so it was a bit hard. Then I realized I could overlap the stitches, so maybe it would be helpful to clarify that. Overall, I thought it was fun and I really like the art style. It’s cute:).
I like this concept! I think it would be nice if it also told us to breathe out, since when it said to breathe in, I was trying to match my breathing to the rhythm and pacing and I didn't know when to breathe out. I found it a bit hard to finish the game, which did make it feel frustrating at times. It might be helpful to consider the negative experiences the players could have, as they might want to quit, which may be your intention. I think it could work better to gradually create a more positive feeling at the end rather than having it feel mostly negative throughout to improve the user experience. Overall, I think this concept is nice and I liked that it focused on mindfulness and self-doubt. I also enjoyed the art and liked how there were visual aids, like the circles, to help match the rhythm.
I really like how this game has a deeper theme, showing how people’s lives can be shaped by environmental factors, like money or simply being born with certain genetics and health. I noticed that the music pace changes each time we move on to another life. I think it could make the emotional impact even stronger if the slower-paced tracks were used for the less fortunate lives, such as those with lower health, less athletic ability, or less money. Overall, I liked the concept and how it reflects a deeper meaning in life.
The transitioning animations from the start screen to the game were really nice. It was a bit hard to play at first since I kept hitting the drones, and it was tricky for me to rotate properly. But I got used to it and actually found it hard to die at one point! I thought it was pretty fun. I think it would be nice to have a score showing how many birds you collected. I think my highest was 25, but I’m not sure how many I collected overall. I also thought it was a really cool idea to use birds to create loops to destroy the enemies. Great work!:D
I thought it was funny that every time I went through the door, the character fell to the side. A suggestion would be to scale up the screen size, as I found it a bit small. Overall, I think it’s a nice idea. It made me think strategically about where to place the items so I could still get through the door. Good job!
I thought the art was cute, and it was a fun rhythm game:). I like how more audience members showed up depending on how well you played to reinforce a sense of accomplishment and progress. I also think it would be nice to have the arrows line up with the music beat to make it more satisfying when hitting the notes. Good job on this game!:)


