The game was great, I loved the skin tone options and having a bit of dialogue choices. Even if those didn't change anything about the scene, it's great for immersion and feeling like you're really controlling the MC !!
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Thanks for all the love and support! (Notes for future parts!) comments · Posted in Thanks for all the love and support! (Notes for future parts!) comments
Yeah, I get what you mean, there has to be tension, and you have a vision for your game! Still, I'm super happy that you're thinking about giving us more choices, I'd like to have options to make her more shy. Or even dialogue options that don't go anywhere and say the same thing but in a different way, they're just there for flavor. Also, I hope that her sexual experience can be up to us as well, I want them to be Virgin x Virgin, that would be so cute!!!
Of course, that's all up to you as the creator, and I'll be happy to write a lengthy review for each update anyway!
I just went through all the content and Jayce is a delight. He's so unintentionally funny at times, and let me say, I love that he's still a virgin (virgin ML for the win!).
His POV is the best part of the game, hands down, and I like it a LOT better than when we're in the MC's head. I like how unhinged he can be and his reunion with the MC was great! Right now he's the perfect mix between dangerous and a puppy in love. I was a bit more ambivalent about the Act 1 - Part 2.
The only thing I wish for, is that we'd influence the MC's personality a bit more through choices, I'm not clicking with her. But I understand that this is a passion project and you're the only person working on it. The MC isn't why we're here anyway, and Jayce as the product is great!!
I'll looking forward to the full game. It feels so special to see a VN for women with 3D models, I hope your game thrives and becomes a classic for yandere enjoyers!
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Edit: I wanted to gush more now that I've realized the rest of my comment gets hidden under a cut, so I can talk about some spoilers.
I really like how you established the source of Jayce's obsession. The intro was genuinely unnerving and as the reader, you feel scared, sad and then moved by him. One can understand how he ended up latching onto the MC. Him deciding to become a better version of himself felt strangely close to me, I got into working out because I wanted to be pretty for my husbandos when I was in highschool, lol.
And the scene where he got his vengeance against Mac, UFFF, I got chills!! Him pissing on that man was a hilarious choice, and tied everything up with a bow. My fav line there was Jayce saying he felt levelheaded, haha!
Other thing, I like how he's focused on marrying the MC. Like, yes, wife her up. He doesn't want to be a boyfriend, he's coming for the husband tittle.
And I love how his geeky personality peeks through.
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It made me super happy to read your reply <33! I actually wanted to say "Hey, it's me, the first commenter!" but I didn't believe you would recognize me and I didn't want to come across as a weirdo, haha!
I'm really happy that you found your crowd, and of course, take all the time you need! I'll wait and cheer for you!!
Oh man, I just played a good amount of "routes/endings" and I love how you can have vastly different dynamics with Riker in each one. Also, one of my favorite things in your game is how you change Riker's sprite art to show us his emotional/psychological state, I admit it's scared me more than once, haha.
I can't wait to see how each path unfolds, I'm especially excited for the conclusion of nearly all of the branches in the "Creep" route ("Kinky", "..." and "Declawed") and also "Doggy dad" because they're really hot and I enjoy the mix of being scared and horny. But I look forward to "Therapy" too, it hurt me and I loved it! I just wanted to hug him in that moment :((
Like other people have said, I would also enjoy learning more about Riker and their past. Was he always like this? Did something traumatic made him that way? I'm very intrigued by him.
Anyways! Thank you so much for your hard work!! :D
Usually, I don't play games that are still in development, since I fear for them to be abandoned. But this game looked so interesting, I had to give it a try. And really, I just wish I had done it sooner!!
The art is beautiful and the story is super intriguing. I love all the characters (especially June), they are complex and have interesting backstories. And even though sci-fi isn't my favorite genre, your game made me see the appeal; I will be totally buying it when it's finished!!
I just finished the demo, and... WOW. It's incredible!
I have always been a fan of romance and horror, but I haven't been able to find a game that includes both elements in a satisfactory way. But I think your game is gonna be what I've been waiting for.
I loved the demo: the voice acting is great, the art is pleasing to the eye, the story is interesting and the characters are so intriguing! I personally liked best Brenton and Tristin, I find them adorable and pleasant, so I'm looking forward to seeing their less agreeable side.
Long story short, I'll totally buy the game when it's complete :D
Your game is really, reallly hot. Mark is super handsome and I adore your art style, it's very pleasing to the eye.
I especially enjoyed the intimacy between the characters. Maybe it's because I'm a romantic at heart, but I loved that they had feelings for each other and they stayed together in the end!! Also, I think I ended up a little bit in love with Mark, lol
I can't believe that a gem like your game is free. I am obsessed!! The choices, the plot, the characters, the art... It's just SO beautiful, thank you for creating such a masterpiece!! I have replayed it three times already and my interest isn't fading.
Also, I have to mention my love for Vadeyn. Usually, the kind and gentle LI is overshadowed by the more "exciting" characters, but Vadeyn had enough internal turmoil to make him just as interesting as any other LI. He is so sweet and so haunted by the blood on his hands... I just had to love him. Reading other comments, I can't believe that he isn't a fan favorite, he stole my heart from the moment I saw him. And his interactions with Cali are so enjoyable! I adore them both, they care so much for each other and the "little cousin" line is sooo adorable to me! They are my favorite duo. Ugh, I just have a lot of feelings about these two.
Sorry if my English is a little bad, it's my second language. And again, I love your game (and Vadeyn), thank you for making it!