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Thanks for kind words. your game looks good too, the banner is very well drawn. I wish you luck in this and future projects!

Thank you for those words and review! I will check your game in a couple of hours when I have time. I'm still working on this game in my free time, just will not update it while in the reviewing period to make it fair with other contestants.

• I thought about doing it automatic, but my logic was making it "realistic" but I could just take 50 of money before going to updates.
• In full screen the birds isn't a big deal, but in smaller screen (such as itch.io's) it does, make the birds in a tone of grey should prevent this.
• I kinda understand that, I didn't play those kind of games in years, so I really don't remember what makes them fun, I will look on it.
• I am aware of the red cross issue (will make it green if I continue to work in this game).
• The music idea is "everthing is try to kill you" with a lot of obstacles like in the menu screen, but I understand it's not the idea the current project's state portraits.

Thank you for your message and ideas, I appreciate that.

• "throws you into the gameplay" :  Next update will have a initial cutscene, in game tutorial (just a slideshow) and surface level.
• "fishing aspect a bit repetitive": I get you, will try to make it more pleasing to do.
• "combat kind of 'bland': Get you again, but I really don't have too much ideas to enhance it.
• "annoying after a while when the bats keep jumpscaring you": Random encounters are a core mechanic, do you think it's ennoying because it's loud or it's the encounter itself?
• "I climbed up three times the game froze on a black screen": It happens because it tries to go to the surface, but there is no durface for now, sorry about that.

Thank you for your comment!

The theme is: "What remains?" it's not easy to get it because it's bold too, but it's the theme.

Thanks for the comment, There is just one drop (the small potion) and one enemy (the bat) for now. Make flee harsher is a good idea, you can look some informations if you hover while pressing control (I'm wiling to make it easier in the future), and the trader have a hidden random value he adds, making it impossible to know the price, but I can add a "it should be selled for [value]" as a base price in the informations panel.

Muito Obrigado :D

I think so, last jam I rate based on the dev logs only, I just played the games to see how it's going

You was right. I put the newest version now. Thank you for making me aware of this.

Beautiful visuals and story, the only thing I can complain is the song is louder than the voices sometimes, but I know it is fixable in the Ren'py settings. Good job.

haha thanks!

Thanks!

Thank you, I will provide the proper explanation in next update, thank you for your critic. I will continue that project after rework the dialogue, which I will do in another project (What a good fish), so I will probably do the third puzzle in early-middle november. 

P.S.: Your project looks great too, I'll check it out soon in next days.

I entered the discord server, my user name is Magão

Thank you, my discord username is uncertainwizard

Thank you for feedback and tips, good luck with your game

Cool concept, as other guy/gal said the crates gets buggy and the transitions flick a little (it shows other scene for a second or less) and the crates stay in other scenes (little and normal plant), good luck.

Thank you for kind words, your game is good (with some bugs) too, good luck

Thank you for feedback, I'm aware it's a little buggy in the web version, good luck on your game

'esc' to leave the crank, you need energy to use the hand in the other side of the room

Obrigado pelo review, realmente está incompleto, já me inscrevi

Thank you for your support! I'm working in another project right now, but when I finish it I will rework on that one.

(I don't comment but the game you made is good too, good luck.)

Thank you.

Yes, the asteroids have a limit to go, but player don't, so you can go out the screen and shoot the enough amount to win, it could be easily solved by putting limits to player and pause the game at the end of travel, sorry about that.

Conceito interessante, não consegui inserir os dados nas tasks e após a primeira falha ambos os marcadores de adrenalina e sanidade bugaram. Enfim, parabéns por ter concluído, sucesso