Wow. It's really impressive how the game has progressed this past month. Thank you for offering us so much content!
If you ever look for a translator, I'd gladly help in adding a French version :D
And I can't believe some people have the nerve to reupload your game elsewhere, with zero concern for copyrights. From creator to artist, I know how this absolutely sucks... You have my full support!
Thanks to you too! It's always a pleasure when the creator responds to comments.
Also, there might be a small thing off in the narration. Perhaps someone else has already pointed out that scene in MC's workplace, where the lights suddenly turn off, she freaks out, and Pierrot shows up next. If MC asks him to leave, she later bumps into him upon leaving as well, and he gives her his red ticket. He never speaks a word or tells her what his name is, yet she somehow knows it the next day. Maybe you could add the dialogue they have inside her workplace (when he tells her his name and that he can't speak in public) outside, right after MC bumps into him.
Oh, thank goodness! Someone made a visual novel about clowns. I've been waiting so long for this concept to be brought to life that I started to think I'd do it myself with what little coding skills I have, so truly thank you for this unique work of art!
I love MC's personality. She's sweet, kind, and so humane that it's totally understandable why she can attract monsters. And all these small details, such as Pierrot stalking her during her work shift, the window of her room being unexplainably open while she doesn't notice it was closed (and I almost didn't either), the little animations of Pierrot's magic trick or the knife throwing, even the details on the save slots screen... Chef's kiss.
You handled the mystery really well; I continue to wonder who's that unknown man who gives MC a pink ticket (is he a monster searching for a good "sacrifice" in town, I wonder...?) or the other freaks of the circus (and that Ticket taker, is he someone important, I wonder too...?). There is so much lore incorporated in such a short amount of time. You have great talent for pacing!
Also, the effects of the music were so good that they gave me chills.
Then of course there are the two main clowns, whose quirks and personalities are so distinct, you don't need to see their name to know who's speaking. In fact, I love that weird manner of speech they have... They almost sound old-fashioned, as if they've been alive for a very long time... I have high hopes for their endings! (secretly cheering for their rivalry...)
I belong to the people who will support you till the end!
