Thanks to you too! It's always a pleasure when the creator responds to comments.
Also, there might be a small thing off in the narration. Perhaps someone else has already pointed out that scene in MC's workplace, where the lights suddenly turn off, she freaks out, and Pierrot shows up next. If MC asks him to leave, she later bumps into him upon leaving as well, and he gives her his red ticket. He never speaks a word or tells her what his name is, yet she somehow knows it the next day. Maybe you could add the dialogue they have inside her workplace (when he tells her his name and that he can't speak in public) outside, right after MC bumps into him.