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I love the sheer amount of choices given; it really helps the game to reflect real life. It's a very realistic narrative that manages to be both simple and complex at the same time. Good job!

I love the concept and I think you are well on your way to your goal! What you have created so far is a wildly ambitious project and what you have completed so far is extremely interesting; I look forward to the future of this game if you choose to continue this.

I would love to see this game in a format in which you must redo the entire day each time rather than specific parts one at a time.  I believe that could add up to a larger overall set of (redundant) endings that would be more satisfying than the current state of the never-ending. I do think I saw an "End" button at some point but I only saw it once and am unsure of how to get it back. The player is kind of left wondering and redoing certain parts over and over again to see if they get all of them right and in the right order, what would then happen? However, both the story and the concept itself are very likable and well-written. I especially enjoyed your dialogue and slight changes as the concequences of specific choices.

I like the simplistic nature of this story. It accurately and easily depicts both the simple routine of daily choices as well as tiredness and simple joy (at the endings in which you as the main character are happy with the fact that you are drawing).

I would love to know the exact probability of each choice and how you coded it. I also enjoyed the art. I think that there is room for expansion in showing more options for how to respond to the contest, but you have definitely accomplished your goal of creating a fairly randomized game of Russian roulette.