looks very interesting, would be nice for there to be a version compatable with itch launcher tho, thats what ive been usin for all my games since its much easier to keep track of stuff
Ah okok, sorry bout that, if you ever need help/want someone to like go over it for you i can help you if you want, you can add me on discord if u ever need like a bit of free proofreading, My discord username is luciferfx
No offense, but I'm guessing your first language isn't English? or is it? i cant tell cause your English on the game page and in the comments is pretty darn good but when (at least starting the game) the English is so broken and terrible and does not make any sense at all...
Examples: (the Bold Italic text is the part that makes no sense)
"This PC shit is nothing for nothing." (not sure what this means at all)
"You come from a loving family, but not with you." (Instead of that maybe "You grew up in a loving home, yet never felt it yourself." or something along those lines.)
"While she can have everything, beautiful clothes, a computer, everything she wants, you how to wear it" (Instead of that maybe "While she gets everything—beautiful clothes, a computer, anything she wants—and you’re left with nothing.")
"But then, for some reason, they decided to travel and take their spoiled sister but you." (change bold to "take your spoiled sister—but not you."
"Haha, you only went to know about this supposed trip when they already had gone, and the only message they left was." (Instead of that maybe"You didn’t even find out about this so-called trip until they were already gone, and the only message they left was:") (this is extra for text past it so it makes more sense) ("We're traveling. We’re not taking you because we don’t want you around, but unfortunately, you're still our son, so we have to take care of you somehow..." , "You’ll get a monthly allowance—whether you survive on it or not is up to you. No idea if or when we’re coming back, so goodbye."
"It's complicated .. more finally, because of that, you don't have a computer of your own, you took the opportunity to use what is in your sister's room, took the opportunity and started customizing him with your face." (Maybe to something like "Long story short, you don’t have your own computer. So, you took the opportunity to use the one in your sister’s room, ********* (stars are because i still dont get what "started customizing him with your face." even means)
"Is there before i forget, what was your name like." (simply to something like "Before I forget, what was your name again?")
was wondering if its possible for chapter/book 2 to be downloadable from itch, like the other download links. i play on itchio launcher now cause its easier to keep track of stuff but i cant play book2 on here because of external downloads. only book 1 and 3
damn you. you got me hooked on the story, and it ended/needs update, for the next parts of it. the last part of the main story got me so hooked just now. im not joking when i felt my heart pumping in anticipation for what comes next, cant wait for next main story update!
im on v0.5 rn and was wondering, are the images of 1: Power in bed getting her tits fondled. 2: Makima getting her tits sucked or whatever. and 3: Kobeni. (that are on the game page) even in the game yet? as of v0.5 Didnt even see kobeni in the game at all so im guessing not.
im a free player and im on version 68. but dalia still does not have a option for after i visit the ruins. even tho it seems you said it was fixed in a prev reply to same problem around 56+ days ago
"This is not available in this version. It's ui bug. It's fixed later." (referring to 67 since 68 came out after that reply)
i have the latest verision of the game (free one on steam) and it seems that the game just ends for some reason when i rest or sleep before i even finish everything. like im 8/20 or something on mai and have not even fought the wind dude yet.
oh no what i meant is if there is special dialog if you name the characters relationship like the first lady. if you have her be mom and call you son. with the desc you get at start it seems to fit pretty well ( you can PM me to give answer if you dont want to put on here)
You have made an AMAZING story IMO. i have binged played it for the past 3 days and i cant even REMEMBER how many times the story made me cry/emotional.
One of, if not, the best VN game thingy (whatever this genre is called) i have EVERY played. And i have 100s downloaded. <3
I feel maybe the floating icons (for doors and locations on map) could show names of what the rooms are and names on arrows of where they go to.... Cause it took me like 10+ min to find the bathroom in the house...
Is it just me or is the beginning (all im at atm) blurry? (open to see it better) (had to make ss smaller cause the 3mb limit of pics)