No offense, but I'm guessing your first language isn't English? or is it? i cant tell cause your English on the game page and in the comments is pretty darn good but when (at least starting the game) the English is so broken and terrible and does not make any sense at all...
Examples: (the Bold Italic text is the part that makes no sense)
"This PC shit is nothing for nothing."
(not sure what this means at all)
"You come from a loving family, but not with you."
(Instead of that maybe "You grew up in a loving home, yet never felt it yourself." or something along those lines.)
"While she can have everything, beautiful clothes, a computer, everything she wants, you how to wear it"
(Instead of that maybe "While she gets everything—beautiful clothes, a computer, anything she wants—and you’re left with nothing.")
"But then, for some reason, they decided to travel and
take their spoiled sister but you."
(change bold to "take your spoiled sister—but not you."
"Haha, you only went to know about this supposed trip when they already had gone, and the only message they left was."
(Instead of that maybe "You didn’t even find out about this so-called trip until they were already gone, and the only message they left was:")
(this is extra for text past it so it makes more sense)
("We're traveling. We’re not taking you because we don’t want you around, but unfortunately, you're still our son, so we have to take care of you somehow..." , "You’ll get a monthly allowance—whether you survive on it or not is up to you. No idea if or when we’re coming back, so goodbye."
"It's complicated .. more finally, because of that, you don't have a computer
of your own, you took the opportunity to use what is in your sister's room, took the opportunity and started
customizing him with your face."
(Maybe to something like
"Long story short, you don’t have your own computer. So, you took the opportunity to use the one in your sister’s room, *********
(stars are because i still dont get what "started customizing him with your face." even means)
"Is there before i forget, what was your name like."
(simply to something like "Before I forget, what was your name again?")