Thanks for the review! We'll be doing a definitive version in the future once we're done with Snow's rest.
I really appreciate the compliments to the artist, he more than deserves the praise, his work elevates the quality of the VN to a higher level. As for the writing, I do agree with you. I'm still discovering my writing style, honestly even my grammar can use some work and Bon is a miracle worker when it comes to that as well. The game jam also added more pressure to write quickly and with my poor habit to procrastinate until deadlines, I rushed most of it during the last week and we didn't really have time to edit.
Then we missed the deadline by a few minutes. which was a major morale blow, we also had work to do with our other VN which we'd been neglecting, so we decided to polish the rougher edges of RitC at the time and publish it so we can get it off our minds momentarily and return to it with a fresher mindset once we finish SR.
We'll take note of your criticisms and try our best to deliver an even better story in the future! <3
- Thamer
PS, If you'd like to point out more examples of where you felt the writing was lacking it would be greatly appreciated.
Yeah it would! We do use background music made by Askii in the VN. He does allow the use of his music in YouTube videos as long you credit it somewhere, we suggest crediting his work in the Video itself so more people are aware of it. Thanks for streaming our stuff!
Hello! It seems that the current version doesn't work on Mac devices. But we'll have a compatible version out with the next update that's releasing soon! <3
The writing and the updated sprites are done, we only have a few CGs left to work on.
Also we placed our @ on our profile. So if you'd like to follow Bon just go ahead and click on the link present on our main page! Thank you again for the support!
I'm so flattered to hear that my artwork inspires you, I'll be working on almost all of the assets so you're in for a treat if you're looking to see more!
Love your review! Thanks for spending the time to write down your opinion and how you felt about the experience. It's very much appreciated, so are all the compliments you gave us. We've taken in your suggestions and wishes and in the future we will make even better content! Stay Tuned!
Yes of course! It's gonna cover 7 days, and it's going to be relatively long, about the length of an average novel, 100k words. But no worries, if that doesn't sound like enough, there are many stories to come from Aetas Valon.
Hello! I hope y'all enjoy this short story. It's part of a much larger story. Which we'll hopefully be getting into over the course of the next few years. We weren't able to fit in everything we wanted, but stick around because after December we plan on updating this and adding at least a dozen more scenes and a few edits to give y'all the story we wanted to make initially. This is our first game jam, so please be gentle ;^^
