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I really enjoyed this game! You made really good use of the 300-word limit, and I  like the small touches of images and text animations that added a lot to the atmosphere. I also agree that the endings could be fleshed out a little more, but I still like them the way they are now. I felt like the choices were straightforward and well-communicated. 

I love restaurant simulator games, and I really liked the simple (but addictive) gameplay. I think the prices for higher items are a little high, given the money we earn per order. I wonder if you could either increase the profit or decrease the price. You could even add timed challenges that give the player more money, and also add an extra layer of stress. It was really fun!

I loved the writing in the downstairs area. I liked the choices you gave, especially the long list of "join us" and the hidden "resist". I was having trouble completing the game, since even after I obtained the level 5 ID card, it wouldn't work. I also kept getting lost in some areas, not really remembering where certain events were supposed to take place. I wonder if it would be possible to add images to help separate these areas more? But overall, really fun! 

This was a really fun and cute game! :) I love all of your illustrations; they added so much visual interest to the story. I got the arrested ending first, and I liked how much the choices branched out and how they led to unexpected places. There was a lot of replayability! 

I really loved the atmosphere in this game! The timer and sanity/health system added a lot of tension. I also liked the different endings and your use of text animations. You already mentioned adding music, but I also think adding sound effects, like a door creaking or clothes rustling, would add a lot to the overall atmosphere (and it might even be more effective without music). I think the pacing is good; the gameplay loop is very quick and easy to redo if you make any mistakes. The choices are also easy to understand.