I loved the writing in the downstairs area. I liked the choices you gave, especially the long list of "join us" and the hidden "resist". I was having trouble completing the game, since even after I obtained the level 5 ID card, it wouldn't work. I also kept getting lost in some areas, not really remembering where certain events were supposed to take place. I wonder if it would be possible to add images to help separate these areas more? But overall, really fun!