These types of games are my cup of tea! There could be a lot added to this game that can really help give an overall polish and really send the message of the game.
Some things to add:
-Give your game some life, adding particle effects to the scenes will really give your game some life (especially those forest scenes )
- post processing effects will drive home what you are trying to achieve (glitch effects during the error scene that can make the error seem more urgent). Unity has some built-in (ish) post-processing effects that you can explore.
-Give the player a bit more to explore and interact through out these scenes. By giving the player something to interact to, they can feel more involved and get engaged in the story. A good example would be the ball in your game, but just crank that up to 11.
I really hope this has helped you and good job on the game!
Game is pretty good. I managed to break the game though after playing the game for a second time. The experiment would not start and the screen will permanently stay white and I had to alt-f4.
