I have read everything you wrote. This chapter was a rough draft so to say. I have been rewriting it and currently just updated the newest version (and hopefully the final before moving on to chapter 2).
In the revision, I wanted to focus on giving the player more of a say, so hopefully the new version is more up to your taste. I did not add ethnicity nor anything that I might not use in the story or be that relevant but if I do see it to work or need it, I 'll definitely add it.
Moving forward, I do want to give the player more choices over their reactions. I'm a newbie to coding and writing IFs so that might be easy to see. I am trying, though, so I hope I can only improve. Saves should be working now, too!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I just updated the prologue and chapter 1. I changed and added a lot of things, though depending on your playthrough, it might not be a huge chunk, but it took me quite a while to get it all together.
I'm glad you're here though! Saves should also work now. Have fun!
Saves were supposed to work, but it seems I made a mistake so right now it doesn't. Hopefully, I get it to work with the next update. Ch 1 is being revised with more choices, so it'll need to be replayed anyway in order for those choices to carry over. Sorry about that!
I hope you'll have an easier time in Ch 2, but I think it'll only get harder the more you learn about them. But maybe something turns you off which makes choosing easier?
