This game could really benefit from being able to click to see the whole text appearing rather than immediately advance to the next slide when you click. I have to wait for all the text to appear, and it feels so slow. I'd rather speed read the text than click through it cause I'm impatient.
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Beautiful design and art. Visually, everything about the game was absolutely top tier. The characters are really great too!
However, I feel like the writing needs some work. There were a few typos/grammatical issues, and some parts just droned on and on and seemed like unnecessary filler. I feel like if you cut out the fluff and fix up the grammar, this game could be absolutely top tier!
(I hope that doesn't come off as rude. I just want to share my feedback <3)
I just streamed your game, and let me say, it was one of the best games I've ever played. As an older sibling, I really related to Lavender's character. The sibling dynamic was very well written as was the rest of the story. As a writer, I really appreciated and loved the writing and concept in this game! The gameplay and art made it even better.
You've truly made a masterpiece sir/ma'am, and you should be very proud of yourself!
11/10 I HIGHLY recommend this to anyone and everyone.