Beautiful design and art. Visually, everything about the game was absolutely top tier. The characters are really great too!
However, I feel like the writing needs some work. There were a few typos/grammatical issues, and some parts just droned on and on and seemed like unnecessary filler. I feel like if you cut out the fluff and fix up the grammar, this game could be absolutely top tier!
(I hope that doesn't come off as rude. I just want to share my feedback <3)