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Awesome stuff my guy!! I especially love that the next level appears when the ball is still in the air. Not sure why, but it makes it extra fun. 🍋✨

THE ALLEY - LOOKING FOR CRITIQUES!!

https://lemonne.itch.io/ch3-the-alley

SHORT pixel point-and-click puzzle game, get into the vent and uncover a horrid secret! Interact with the environment to open all the locks.

I am curious regarding the theme, setting, art, "story". Ought I continue the series or not!

ANY engagement is greatly appreciated! LOVE Y'ALL!!

YESS!! LOVE IT!! 🍋✨

As a lover of lemon, I love it! Say, what program do you use for point and clicks?

Yeah, I somewhat confused myself with chapters vs numbers of games..😅

You're absolutely correct, this should say ch.2.

This is tough! I like it! The cut-out art is super neat! The platforming is tight!

One thing. I really want to read what's going on on stage, but I'm busy with platforming. Not sure what to suggest. Maybe voice acting could be implemented?

All in all, very cool!

Interesting concept! 

It's perhaps a little slow.. Maybe a sprint or dash mechanic would be fun?

My favorite was probably the weapons! I like the animations, their HUGE range, and how they lock into the direction you face. This gives certain strategy to combat. I like it!

Very nice! Please continue development!

- Thank you!

- Thank you!

- Very true!

- That's awesome!

- Yeah.. The visual wasn't the best. It's all in the name. Thricetap aka tap/click 3 times to temporarily chase away the shadow.

- I think I could cross off the ingredients on the sheet after you add it to the cauldron so there is no confusion.

This is really good criticism, thank you very very much! I believe that the biggest issue was unclear instructions... This is the key in puzzle games. Too little/bad info = confusion, too much = no challenge.

Wow! 15 tries! Now that's called commitment! Thank you very very much for your interest and suggestion!!!

Really cool game, sounds and visuals! Lich's design is really awesome! One suggestion, I was a little confused about the sword's range. Maybe a visual could help (like a white slash)?

Thank you very much! Yeah I see how it can be missed.. I could simply have any left_mouse_input close page if: page open. That'll do it! Thanks again!

As a matter of fact I do have a mild adoration of cats! Very cute game with great soundtrack, cozy feel and, most importantly, a cat :) 

Thank you very very much!! I was really going after the FEEL aspect. I'm really happy that it worked!

Thank you for your response!

The pages on the pillars are instructions and are clickable, but I think I could have made this more apparent for sure.. Also, what parts feel laggy?

Yeah, I get what you mean. I have a couple of ideas on how to fix it. 

Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! I appreciate it 👍 

Hey! Thanks for the interest! Think of the cycle of life of a dandelion (bottom to top) - first it's a flower, then we have seeds, then the seeds are gone

Thank you! Shall continue my work!