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azalea

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This was an exceptionally delightful read!! All of the characters are incredibly charming, and I definitely appreciate their tight-knit dynamic. I'm head over heels for Ajmal, seriously. And Felice isn't the sort of RO I gravitate towards, but you did an incredible job with planting intrigue and allowing for different dynamics between them and MC. It's the first time I'm truly looking forward to seeing how the relationship between the MC and an RO develops, without actually intending to pursue them romantically.

As someone who's picky about MC personality and choices, I'm very much satisfied with the reactions/dialogue you supply us with. I deeply appreciate the ability to say one thing while thinking another, and other personality nuances like that; not all IFs allow for the MC to feel like a tangible character and participant of the story, but yours is one that allows me to be properly immersed.

The only instance regarding dialogue options that stood out was when we were presented with the choice to either confess to Ajmal or leave. Given that every other possible romantic interaction is presented with a relatively straightforward either/or with regular choices and then romantic versions of those choices, it feels off when my character isn't forward enough to initiate but is undeniably smitten with Ajmal, so I am cornered into the "non-romantic" choice. I believe a combination of the two would work well, where MC wishes to say something but can't bring themselves to.

Given your recent update to save files, I'll mention that the formatting was confusing to me and I only figured out how it works by accident. If there's a way for you to more clearly distinguish the save/load slots with the save/load files, organizing them visually into 2 columns instead of 9 rows, I think that could help some future confusion from others as well.

All in all, amazing read. Your prose is elegant, and I'm so fond of your characters. I'm really, really looking forward to future uploads!

Is this at all friendly for roleplaying as a male MC? If there aren't many mentions of the MC being female then I might be able to ignore it since the character I play as is pretty feminine to begin with; this game looks incredibly fun and I'd like to give it a shot.

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I apologize in advance--I haven't had the chance to play this thoroughly yet, only beginning portions. The fact that the main character's name is set in stone was off-putting for me. The character customization is so intensive where I can't entirely imagine why we would not be allowed to change our name, or at least a nickname or a name we prefer to go by. The writing is fantastic and the choices are pretty thorough, so this would be the primary thing to break immersion for me.

Just binged up to Chapter 5 in one sitting. You really have a knack for making me feel attached to my own character, or maybe I'm just soft--after that particular ch5 revelation with Rana, I felt my heart plummet and felt my character's hurt as my own. Truly had to sit there for several moments and contemplate how I wanted to react. Kudos, author!