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Overall a great game.
However, I don't like the fact that the camera goes beyond the walls, the enemies blend into the walls and don't give any warning sound at all, which makes it very difficult to understand that an enemy is coming towards you. But nevertheless, I reached the end.
I would be grateful if you also play my game
I really liked this game.
I think there are no bugs here, everything is done really well!
But I still think that more different decorations could be added so that the game does not look "empty". And also the music would be better.
I hope this will help you improve the game. I will also be glad if you play my game!
Very nice work! It would be worth a little effort with the design of the page.
The graphics are at a high level, the idea perfectly matches the theme of the jam!
However, the music gets boring quite quickly, it doesn't really fit as a platformer.
There are still gaps in the balance, because the game is too difficult.
I hope this review helps. I will be glad if you play my game!
Honestly, the idea is probably not bad, but in practice it doesn't work very well...
The controls are not convenient, I understand that we need to move with the help of shots.
Then how do we get through this game?
The graphics and music are almost non-existent.
I don't want to offend with this criticism, if anything.
Can you also rate my game?
Honestly, the game as a whole doesn't look very good...
The text is quite difficult to read...
The controls are generally okay, but I don't really like the fact that the jumps are quite small compared to the obstacles.
Also, of course, there's a lack of music.
This game could have potential in Roblox, but definitely not here
Honestly, I really liked the project overall. I have to say, it's pretty much what I really wanted to see. This game is really about inner feelings and it fits the theme of the jam as the next step in a relationship. It's really great work. Would you mind if we had a more in-depth conversation about your project after this jam is over?
l ike your music skills! If you are interested, I have a small team, you can check out our previous projects we did for the jam on my profile. Of particular note is that our previous game Rewrite was submitted to the Gdevelop5 Jam and took high places in categories such as game design, originality and innovation!
We really need composers like you right now!
My Discord: Layn679
like your music skills! If you are interested, I have a small team, you can check out our previous projects we did for the jam on my profile. Of particular note is that our previous game Rewrite was submitted to the Gdevelop5 Jam and took high places in categories such as game design, originality and innovation!
We really need composers like you right now!
My Discord: Layn679
I like your drawing skills! If you are interested, I have a small team, you can check out our previous projects we did for the jam on my profile. Of particular note is that our previous game Rewrite was submitted to the Gdevelop5 Jam and took high places in categories such as game design, originality and innovation!
We really need artists like you right now!
My Discord: Layn679









