Excellent story, interesting characters, adventure, intrigue and more. Only one flaw that I've noticed. It's massive with him having a harem. I'm through a minimum of 5 months on the timeline as I can tell. He still has not been with all of his wives. This could be accomplished inside a week.
So logically speaking, if the initial excitement of love results in sex less than twice a year for each wife, things will only get worse from here. My thoughts are this was written by a woman from her perspective as the protagonist. No consideration whatsoever for the actual harem that was already wild with lust even before meeting the main character.