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I am so happy this got a post-jam update as this was by far my favorite game I played this Jam! Thank you for updating it!

9.5/10 - Easily one my fav pregnancy-based story I have played; up there with the finished product of Hellbrainz stuff; I wish it was a little longer honestly but I mean its a great product for it being free. Getting to see what happens after phase 4 was enthralling and I hope you make more games. I would love to see a second game with Zel or with another one of your OC's that are pregnant. 

Ps. All errors got patched and it ran flawlessly. 

Interesting premise; the bug where once you get everything then get to the second inventory upgrade; you get the nasty bug where it crashes and gives you an error.  I will genuinely honest and say the fact the dev didn't test up to that point and patch before they published is wild though considering the rush to submit I also don't blame them.

Solid 7.5/10 - Has a lot of promise to it; the sprites are lovely; I wish there was more dialogue in between upgrades and through the endeavor with the upgrades  that we learn a bit more about the area she is in and how she gets pregnant through it. 

That's so fair with the time constraints; I look forward to playing through it once more with the updates. 

When I tried to download it; I immediately got that quarantine warning.

I managed to beat but it took me a HOT min to figure out why events weren't trigging and I managed to at least find bugs; I wish it was a little longer Great Promise; I hope it gets expanded apon. Feedback + Bugs noted below

Bug 1. For some reason as I got the piece of missing track she didn't place and wouldn't; causing me to be soft-locked. Reloading my save fixed it.

The puzzle with that were revealed after doing so that were hidden by the belly at least need to shown a different color if you are incorrect in doing so or correct with another color. Wasn't hard but I did the answer twice and took forever for it trigger. (felt like a bug).

- Code puzzle with the last Pillar I will say not a fan; the "ticks" aren't clarified as I tried that many times and bugs caused to not do so, then I tried again then it worked? was odd to me.

Funnest Ice puzzle yet, loved it cause having a pillar you can place made it easier. People just didn't read the PDF file for flower one which is insane but all in all 7.5/10. I wish it was longer is all.

Overall Review of the early version: 8/10 (The sprite work is really fun).

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Its in the minecart puzzle where the red sigils are; you have follow the pathing exact. Doing once may not cause the event to trigger or so doing it twice to double check works. It cause the sigils to disappear afterwards.

I managed to beat but it took me a HOT min to figure out why events weren't trigging and I managed to at least find bugs; I wish it was a little longer Great Promise; I hope it gets expanded apon. Feedback + Bugs noted below

Bug 1. For some reason as I got the piece of missing track she didn't place and wouldn't; causing me to be soft-locked. Reloading my save fixed it.

The puzzle with that were revealed after doing so that were hidden by the belly at least need to shown a different color if you are incorrect in doing so or correct with another color. Wasn't hard but I did the answer twice and took forever for it trigger. (felt like a bug).

- Code puzzle with the last Pillar I will say not a fan; the "ticks" aren't clarified as I tried that many times and bugs caused to not do so, then I tried again then it worked? was odd to me.

Funnest Ice puzzle yet, loved it cause having a pillar you can place made it easier. People just didn't read the PDF file for flower one which is insane but all in all 7.5/10. I wish it was longer is all.

Few choice words of positive feedback;

- art style great and its awesome that its 3D and animated

- Remove the day / night constraint and put an option that allows the player to choose when to end the day

- Allow Heather herself to hold an extra pumpkin instead of one at time as it makes gameplay feel slow

- The streak itself whilst a cool element has to be slower with how floaty she is as you have to pick n rush to increase it

- Explain the blender does as It isn't at all

All in all Solid 7/10

Very Fun, lots of bugs but I did love it! I'd love to see more with her Zel and her progression in the finished version honestly.

Ps. After making it to Phase 4; I will engine breaking down has to either a) Be Less Frequent or b) just entirely removed as a gimmick and replaced with something else as its not fun to have to delay progression over and over again when the character walks slow as fuck.

Pss. Most annoying bug I encountered so far was when in the middle of a puzzle, she'd get a contraction and it go from like 5:30 to like 5 seconds left which makes no sense and its definitely an error in the code.

Overall 6.5/10 - I would rated it higher but the that last phase and the bug that really soured my experience even after save scumming; I could never get the ending and it kept forcing meltdown on me, not to mention a bug I am going to mention here as fucking annoying and HUGE softlock was When you get to super challenging puzzle; the last 2 nodes, go red and I am stuck on that screen forcing a meltdown + contractions which awful.

Skill issue, I was also using my laptop and I had a mouse and I beat it very easily. If you struggle with TOUHO shooters then that on you but the monsters aren't that bad; you get more health the more you kill and the bite really does a buff, I will agree with you on that.

I managed to beat on my first try! Actually really fun game; I hope this gets expanded apon in the future with more story; more belly and definitely more levels and enemies to fight

Solid 9/10 - My only grip was how short it is.

Fun game, second test feels unfair tbh.

I would try this but the warning is scary.

Note: After seeing the devs message; it was probably flagged for no reason.

Thoughts n Feedback;

- Animations NEED to be polished. The woman (unnamed) floats about instead of walking which is off-putting. Would love to also see baby kicking about and jiggle physics or just like physics in general for tummy.

- 3D model look not bad; I wish there was more to do during each month and more to experience. 

- The last month with the dark section really suck, i get the premises behind; middle of the night etc but the lights don't really do much so at least make it brighter or add more switches that actually illuminate the area. 

Solid 5.5/10 - Felt rushed imo, has so much promise to it. Needs to be touched up and it would be great.

I love how silly it is ~ I hope it gets expanded apon and we get more pregnancy scenes with the slime made herself! 

Its fun for what it is! 

Ps. Still got lost not knowing the first objective is.

Would love to see more areas and environments. Would love to all see if possible baby kicking and such as she walks around to collect the materials. For some reason, the browser version feels better and items spawn as the download one has a weird bug where I had no items spawn at all.

Definitely one of the better games for Preggo Game Jam #2 since HellBrain5 always delight but he had to rush it with a deadline which wasn't his fault cause there was 21min left! I cant wait to him update it and add more to it. I would of been nice if there was a proper "bad ending, whether she was pregnant or not" but I get time restrictions still a solid 9.5/10.

I can't wait for future updates! I have already sent a suggestion on what I would love to see added but to reiterate (I know its only demo but i am excited) : 

1. needs a lewd death (pregnant/non-pregnant versions) 
2. endings where the player gets to see her belly reaching a heavily pregnant size of her collecting the germs in every level (secret ending for secret levels).
3. This is prob hard to do; but would be fun to see some Belly growth as she goes through each level (slowly getting bigger and heavier).
4. Lewd facial expressions for seeing her react to her stomach growing as she gets more and more pregnant through each level (with some form of dialogue).
5. Crazy but optional; Different clothing options like a bikini or a version we can play as her with her belly huge carrying; single, twins, triplets etc.
6. Would love/adore a level selection with settings like Pre-pregnancy and you can pick how pregnant she. Forgot to mention needs to be a checkpoint system on accidental deaths.

Lots of love,

Kain <3