Jaylen saying, "I know" was brutal and I had to fully take a minute away. By loop X I was so spellbound I didn't even notice my music had ran out and couldn't stop reading. The way you used Alts in the narrative too, just... Ah! Perfect gut punch!

Oh wow, small world! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. Shoot me a message if you ever want a version of the PDF formatted for printing.

Updated version should be live! If you still have problems reading all the content feel free to give me a shout, if I can fix it I will. 

 If all else fails I'm going to try and get a nice-enough plain text version ready as a backup.

Ok, that is very strange. I always thought twine auto-generated that kind of scroll bar. I'm back at my desk now for a few hours so ill see about getting an updated version that's more generally accessible for smaller displays up.

So there should be a small "begin" button just to the left of the image but predictably now im loading it on my laptop rather than desktop that button isn't there without going fullscreen. Probably an issue with screen sizes. Will updated it so the title is one big start button as a backup as soon as i get back to my desk. In the meantime try going fullscreen or re-sizing the window.