This is some great work. I especially liked how you managed to balance the dialogue, action, and narration moment to moment, creating a vivid mental picture, just like a movie. Even great published authors forget to do this many times.
Thank you. Its been exciting pulling together this short “choose-your-own-adventure” campaign idea. I’m glad the writing was enough to tell a story while also leaving things open for play. Hopefully the whole thing will be just as satisfying!
The narrative is mostly sorted. I was lucky what was in my head happened to match the writing jam. Now it’s mostly a matter of terrain, objectives, and buffs to work out!
That was a cool story. The world felt very real and lived in. I really enjoyed the sober quality of the story unfolding its setting within a setting. :0)
