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I really like the art work and the light as this works to build the envirment. I found the game fun and interesting.

i like that you start using npc text to build the a sort of crenature the feeling of tense as you start to thing of how the crime scene and how you are going to solve it

i like the way you have created the puzzle on different object i really like the puzzle as it as this build on the detective side as you having to use clues to solve the pixel.

a improvement would be space some of the text out on some of npc as there bit were it can be ovelap0oing and also make it bit more bigger so can be easier to read.

other than that i rely enjoyed the game:)

very good start I like that enemy keep chasing u so u are always on graded, and that you have included in text this give a better under standing of the story. the combat is good as you have a vary of different weapons and that you are able to swap them and like that you have to use the gun to one defend but also to us them to be able to complete the level by shooting the rock however some of the ammo collectable diddnt work and the shotgun was like a sinper and that there could be a variy of enemys 

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nice level like the simple control, nice timer

car fly when drive and hit bump goes flying, need more to level

nice start to the game, like the way the enemy chase and push the play off the map.

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play go off map and that the camera zoom in and that you can not see much.

like level design, like text pop when approaching props

need audio, need collider sort out, texture need sort out 

like the level the car move smoothly and that the music bring the game together as this fit well with the timer event and that when you have resented that you keep with the time as this add bit of a diffulcuy to the game as you are having to try to finish without making any mistake.

improvement could use something on the side of track so some building so there are something to the environment and the car could need a texture so race colour to it so it look like more of a race car.

other then that great start 

like the style, and level design and the character design. like the way that when you collide with a object that it changes colour and show that you have collided and that other one spawn so you have to search.

  could add a counter so that that you are able to know how many object that you are needing to collect as right now i thought that when you collect the first one i thought something was going to happen and didn't relied that you have to collect other object, also could add a small light that turn on to show that you are activating the light and this would work well with the game. 

other than that really great start

like the game, like the way that you have add text to object and give some information about what they are, also like the different rang do the props that you have use within your game. and the layout of the level so that you are able to walk around to different one and that they are not fixed.

improvement that there could be a bit of sound that play in background or when inaction with the object that you have in the level, could use some texture on the wall of you level like something different for each are.

other than that great work

like the game like the land scape of how you don your game, like how the you able to drive and that the control are smooth and the timer you are able to see it clear and that once you cross the finished line that it reset but it also keep the tie that you have done and I think this is good think

i think this could do with some sound this could be from a radio or sound from the car, also could a tower like how the track has it to make it look more like a race track.

other that really great star

like the game, like the design of the level and that you are able to explore the game. and the way you have created it so that you able to interact with the game object that are in your game and the other npc you have added in you game. i really like the day and night cycle you implemented into your game this add more to the game and the music you have added as well work well with everything.

you could add more object for the player to interact with object and that you also could more object such as other house or even other npc in the game level.

this really great start 

like the degn of the game, like the use of the particle you have done within your level and the way you do the waterfall. like that you have use a plan to create a jump and that you have old rust prop on the side to  understand that it is apaicalps game 

improvement the time in black and that when you go to certent area of the map you are not able to see the time that there is also that when you as you go up the plane for the jump that could be more wide as you hit the chire on the plane and sometime fall threw the map. other than that good start

good game like the way that you have done when the player walk up to object that you give them bit of history about what it is about and that you have different history place shown in the game.

could do with bit of music like nature or something smooth in the background as the player walk around, other place so like you got thing from Europe could and some room that have other place such as thing Asian, also the player is able to fall thought the door  

like the design of the level and the Easter egg you have to add like them and how you are using touch to light the way to show where you are meant to be going.
you could add some dull light to show where you meant to go or it specific area that you like someone to go to. could add some stuff to interact with this could from opening a door or just object that you have to move to find a secret or you could add something that chasing the person and that you may have to hide just something else in the game