like the degn of the game, like the use of the particle you have done within your level and the way you do the waterfall. like that you have use a plan to create a jump and that you have old rust prop on the side to understand that it is apaicalps game
improvement the time in black and that when you go to certent area of the map you are not able to see the time that there is also that when you as you go up the plane for the jump that could be more wide as you hit the chire on the plane and sometime fall threw the map. other than that good start