Very pretty piece! I love the incorporation of crickets into it. Harp sounds beautiful and this piece really builds and develops nicely. The section around :42 came in exactly when I was feeling like we needed another section lol. Really loved your harp writing on this. Great work Maestro!
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Harpsichord, theremin, and guitar... This track literally was made for me. Really enjoyed it. Productions great - only feedbackI have would be to try and get a real guitarist on this and maybe mix the drums to sound "bigger" around the 1:00 mark. That would go SO hard. But really, loved this. Great job Maestro!
Cool chords, and really love that synth line on top of them. A little pro tip - double check your mix volume when exporting. It's a little hard to hear, and honestly people do perceive "louder" as better - it just makes it sound more impressive/polished etc even if its just the same track a few dB higher. I've used that trick tons of times when trying to get things approved lol. Great work Maestro!
First off - anyone who knows when to use a sound effect to tell the story and to do it right wins. And you definitely did it great on this opening. I love how the music box is a framing device, but you have all this other awesome stuff going on and the music box actually isn't even the main thing once we get into it. The choir samples you used are actually phenomenal. I really enjoyed this one, phenomenal work Maestro!
Really enjoyed the sonic palette you are working with here. The sound of flowing water works so well with the human voices and cello. I really love how this develops and builds through the progression of the piece. I really love the middle section in particular when it thins out and all the elements are scattered and more sparse. It would be interesting to see you find a way to stage this live since it's mostly acoustic instruments. Perhaps a table top waterfall??
I'm actually listening to this while looking out a rainy window in a coffee shop on a river and its SENDING me lol. Really great work man
I had the biggest grin on my face the second I heard those opening juicy synths. I really love the way you explore ambience through the reverb and decay of those more bell like synths and effects. It would be cool to hear a bit of a contrasting section where you can really highlight that ambience and capture that loneliness in the image more. But overall great job!
I love the way your incorporated the rain and the synths. It almost blurs the lines between sound effects and music where it becomes a sort of noise generator on the synth that opens and closes with the filter. This is a really cool idea I'm gonna have to play around with myself. Really love how the piece develops overall! Amazing work.
I'm gonna add a counterpoint to DSound on this one - he is right that a melody would help a lot - but I think this is really cool as a more textural based piece. My only comment is that I think it would benefit it to grow faster in it's arrangement and have a little more variation in the ostinato. This is a really interesting piece and it almost feels like being at a parade in front of a really awesome and unique marching band. Loved the textures overall. Great work!!
Loved the use of water sounds incorporated into the track. Overall a really cute waltz. I'd love to see some animated hermit crabs dancing to this haha. Love how it builds! Only suggestion would be I'd love to hear some higher pitched instrument like a glock either doubling the melody or playing a few counter notes towards to end to really open it up. Check out "Fish and Bird" by Tom Waits to hear an example of this effect. But overall really well done!!


