I'd be happy to respond but that requires me to have a SubscribeStar account to even see what you're asking. And I don't want to sign up if this is the only thing I'll use it for. Could you at least show what the questions are here?
Wow. So despite some reservations I went ahead and gave this a try and I am very happy I did. There are many parts that are not to my taste (I'm not really in to M/F sex), but even parts that weren't what I usually like were still pretty hot and enjoyable (and the occasional lesbian side action was appreciated), very little of it was actually unpleasant. Did have some issues, primarily the sex dungeon (doing it without skipping anything is way too long, and there's some glitches and it's possible to soft-lock), also wish there were more choices (especially choices about the MCs form). But regardless, it was very fun and engrossing and hot, and I'm glad I gave it a chance.
Oh good. I was kinda getting really anxious and worried that I had bothered you. And yeah, as a .... lapsed... writer, I feel the same about listening to criticism. I also sometimes come off a little harsh. Many times before I've asked for feedback and then when the person suggests something, I'll say something like "no, that wouldn't work," and then the person would be like "what did you ask me for if you won't take any suggestions?", and I'm like "hearing different perspectives is always useful, even if I disagree it helps me think about things in a different." Many times I was able to come up with a really good idea by listening to someone else, even though the idea I came up with was completely different from what they expected.
Anyway, hearing you say this not only relieves my worries but motivates me even more to give you a very detailed analysis with criticisms and suggestions. It won't be very soon, but I'm definitely gonna do it.
Oh, and it really is impressive what you've done as a solo dev making your first game. Seriously, bravo. Keep up the good work, I look forward to what you do in the future.
Thank you for your quick response and for answering my questions. I want to apologize if I overstepped or bothered you. Also, I have to apologize for saying it felt short. Length isn't the most important thing in games, short games can be good. But also, I made a mistake. I thought I had played two chapters but I had only played one, so my comment was misinformed. I don't have anything more to say at this time, but I plan on giving you more detailed thoughts once I've played more (including starting again from the beginning so I can pay closer attention and take notes). If you disagree with anything I say I won't be offended, art is complex and different people have different perspectives; I want to give you mine as long as you're okay hearing it. I completely sympathize with taking on a big task alone, I don't really expect anything specific in any given time frame, I just was curious about your plans and also wanted to give you some constructive criticism. What you have made is so rare that I feel more invested than I do in most games so I feel compelled to comment in hopes that the game will be better (eventually, no time frame expected); but I also totally understand that we might disagree on what makes things "better." I'm rambling a bit, sorry, I tend to be very wordy, I just want to be sure I haven't bothered you or offended you, and know if it's okay for me to say more; I sometimes give criticism where it is not appreciated and I don't mean to be a bother.
Sorry, this is a lot, feel free to ignore, I like your game.
I tried the game out and I like it, but I do have some thoughts and questions.
How many Chapters are you planning to make? How long do you expect to eventually make the game? I enjoyed what I played but it felt a little short. Also, will purchasing the game as is get me all chapters you eventually make?
Do you consider Chapters 1 & 2 "done"? I feel like they could be better, and there's a few moments where I wish I had some different choices.
In the planned future content that involves sex with male characters, is any of that mandatory? Will there be more transformation just what happens to the protagonist early on? Maybe other characters?
There's more I could say and feedback I could give but I don't want to say too much or be too nitpicky unless you want to hear it.
Anyway, I still do love the game; it's like a breath of fresh air to find this kind of content. Male-to-futa is rare, and the fact that this game has pregnancy, aliens, harem, corruption, a mostly top/domme protagonist (who is also ridiculously powerful) and all sorts of things on top of that is just wonderful. Also, while the writing is a little inconsistent and unpolished, it's always engaging, never boring. Everything you do well far outweighs any criticism I could give.
I like it, but sometimes the visuals aren't that clear. Like, the health status icon is a little confusing, a bar would be much better. Also, I had no idea what I was supposed to do in that launch(?) drone(?) section right after the first boss. Still, I am impressed by your ambition, and I look forward to what the full game will be.
I'd at least glance at them. Some of the more technical stuff I might skim, but I'd take a look. I do enjoy reading about game development and I do check my itch feed very regularly.
What happened? Last week this was available to purchase here on itch, but now this page only has a demo. Why was this changed? Will this be available to purchase here on itch at some point in the future?
I notice that each of these games is still available individually on your itch page, what is the difference? Are those the old versions, and if so, what is changed in these new versions?
I love it. But I'm stuck at the elevator(?). It seems like I need to enter it, and I thought I'd just press up to do so, but I tried that, and a whole lot of other things and nothing seems to work. What am I supposed to do here?
Oh, also, do you think you could add an undo button and a restart button? Having to pause it and then restart it every time is a little annoying. Not a big deal, but it'd be nice.
Really liked it, but three time in a row, the demo crashed at Level 5, right before I finished the puzzle. But when I tried it one more time everything worked fine. Thought I should let you know.
Just tried the demo, it was amazing. Thank you so much for including gender selection, I loved the female protagonist's voice actress (well all the voice actresses are good, but she gets special mention for nailing domme voice). I look forward to the full version.
