Hey! I left a message on F95 but i'll paste it here too.
i was prepared to talk about mechanics, but there's no flaws i can really find.
perhaps the default message speed could be 0.75 instead of 0.5 but really, that's it.
the ui never bothered me, like it doesn't look bad. it doesn't stand out a ton though. not something you'd actually have to adress.
there seem to be hotkeys for controlling the game, but i can't find a list of them. did i miss something?
while i didn't care for the main character at first glance, you very quickly had me invested with the line about the intern denying that he did the right thing.
super clever way to have me rooting for him.
"The thought creeps in, seductive and warm" man, i like this. it's like a cheeky nod to players that already have their schlongus out. you know what you're doing.
just before "by some act of cosmic charity-" the title screen flickered for a moment and i though
t it was part of the story.
not an actual problem, but i thought i'd better bring it up.
the "how the hell can a taxi driver doesn't know-" line needs to be rewritten. i understand the intent of the sentence but it's not quite there yet.
also, on that line, it is a bit uncomfortable to read the text against all the variations of colours behind it with the house's garden. at first i thought it was the italics or the font at fault but i didn't have that much of a problem prior.
i know how much of a pain it is to chuck another font in unity but if you find time, people might appreciate ahving that option a lot.
maybe a slider for transparency on the dialogue canvas too? i hate to ask because you've already clearly done so much work.
gotta say man, once elena showed up... yep. that was certainly worthy of hiding the ui and drinking it all in there for a second.
that's where i stopped for now.
surprised you didn't put a price on it! people would pay for this man.
