Gonna ask, is Rou the only love interest (if there is)?
Jay20joy
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Hello, I've been hearing your VN for about a year now, so I'm playing it. Currently in Coach Harold's Route, and the story is lovely so far. However, there is an error in Day 15. I tried to pick 'track' because I want to increase my stamina (if it does). I hope you can fix it in the next update. Anyway, I like how choosing the love interest of the MC depends on what you did on Days 1 and 2. (Got Dwayne in the first two runs and Richard next.)
Here's the error by the way:
Hello, Jay here! Been reading your VN since the soft launch. Just finished reading Chapter One, and let's just say it caught the humor of us Pinoys. But I'm here to inform you of some typos in the story, like your and you're (unless intended). If you want some help polishing some words, may I help you? I may be a little bit rusty since I last copyedited in high school, but I still have the drive.
The story so far is engaging, and putting both the English and Filipino side-by-side helps us understand what the words mean in our language.
There are still some typos in your words, mostly the words "your" and "you're". Sorry, but my copyediting skills get to me (unless intended).

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Even if it may take about a year or two, I'll be waiting.
(P.S.: I didn't know Gebbous proofread your VN. What a great honor. I wish I could help you in any other way, Neon. Keep it up!
P.S.S.: I'm broke too.)
