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Hello! I'm attempting to make a horror adjacent toxic yuri VN about an online cult where each route ends poorly. There are three routes for three characters as a basis where the head girl gives a task for the player and chosen girl to fulfill and document if that info helps at all, though I don't expect them all to be written if it's too much work. They will be linear once the player locks in their route. I have the basic concept but it's not fully fleshed out or figured out start to end, I want insight and help as I'm not a writer! I don't plan to charge money for this VN so it is a volunteer position. 

Please meet the following requirements:
- Experience writing GL/Yuri, I won't accept otherwise. Can be fanfics and personal stories, I'm not picky outside of not wanting collaborators with no interest in Yuri. 

- Self made works only. I will not accept AI. 

- 18+ only , this work focuses on adult themes, abuse, and suggestive content. Please also be comfortable with darker topics including injury and blood. There is a lot of  intimacy between adult characters even though there's no explicit NSFW. 

I only need a writer, I'm handling all other aspects of the VN! If you're interested please reach out to me on discord @meoneru. Introduce yourself and show some of your work ^-^ I don't respond to hi DMs with nothing else because I am wary of scams. If you prefer I reach out to you somewhere then please leave your user and the platform below. Thank you. 

To start, I think this is a really interesting concept and this game has some gorgeous art. I quite like the menu upon completion of this EP and a good handful of the aesthetic choices made in this game. There are a lot of cgs / cutscenes in this game which showcase the artistic talent present in the work quite a bit which is also very nice. I do look forward to playing this in the future as a long time fan of RPGMaker horror games and a Himejoshi. ( °ヮ° )

But I did find playing this somewhat frustrating... 

First of all, the minigames are surprisingly frequent and tedious for an entry to a series of games. They're vague in what they want you to do which means it'll likely take the player a moment to understand how to use and play through the minigames. This, sometimes, leads to death. And the death scene is also quite lengthy with zero option to skip it. Being booted back to the main menu on top of that, having to deal with failing tedious minigames more than once can feel super grating. 

The minigames could benefit from clearer indicators ( in the form of instructions or markers ) , and shortening the requirements for completion to be a bit less punishing. ( only suggested due to the frequency of minigames, it can turn players away if they have to do a lot of work right away before they've even gotten to get very far into the game. )  It might also be helpful to clarify at some point this game alternates between keyboard and mouse quite often.( like the title screen, or the first time we have to use the mouse for something ) Because of the positioning of the player's hands on the keyboard to use traditional RPGMaker controls, switching between the two can feel a little bit jarring. Using WSAD controls is also a possible solution ( and there is a way to modify it in JS files rather than using an additional plugin if preferred! ) 

There's also a heavy amount of flashing present in cutscenes. I think the "effect" of effects can wear if used too often, so it might be ideal to use very flashy and screen altering effects less frequently since they can cause heavy eyestrain, as a note for the future. 

Hopefully that's not too much, this game is already really great and has a ton of potential to be something incredible if made with great care. I'd like to see it do well in the future, so I hope this comment reads as helpful feedback rather than ill intentioned insults. 

P.S - Im not sure if it was intentional but all of the game files can be accessed without a decompiler. I noticed right away the download comes with access to all assets, plugin list and potentially the project file. 

Thank you!

A really cute concept! Unfortunately I have a very wide monitor, and quite a bit of the UI was offscreen in the dress making menus, so I wasn't able to play.

Adorable game ^-^ 

sent a friend req! 

Hello! My name is Meo, I'm a digital artist looking for projects to work on. 
I'm looking specifically to provide art for Character portraits or Character concept art, as these are both something I'd be happy to work on and would like to add to my portfolio. My art is anime-leaning. 

As I am offering my art for free I cannot provide excessive amounts of work, work for last minute deadlines, or professionalism as I am not a professional! ( Though I will do what I can to make sure things go smoothly for both parties. ) 

I also cannot or choose to not draw the following:

• Masculine/Muscular characters 
• Heavy Mecha/Armor
• NSFW or Suggestive works 

Here's where you can view a majority of my art! https://idiotmeo-portfolio.crd.co/

Unfortunately I didn't seem to receive it. ( or we have talked in the past already ) 

still looking btw!

Looking to volunteer on visual novel projects or projects that just need sprites. This will be free, but since it will be free I will only work on short projects and ask that you are willing to properly credit me for my work. Thank you ! 

You can see examples of my art here

Please contact me through the link or in discord at MEO#4962