elijah is the embodiment of "don't bully me, I'll cum" >:3
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oh a 5th chapter for day 20 thank you.
Just wondering so i can play it fully from start to finish ✨️🤩✨️
Edit: "only one last chapter in Tai's Route remains" ugh i grossly overlooked this part *facepalm* 😅
I thought they were a guy a first wondering why their eyes were feminine, then saw their female pronouns. never in my almost 30 years of gaming have i found a fictional female character sexually attractive until now
My following statement tells you i know this "I know he was getting a read for the MC reaction" But my point is, drowning them in lore etc right away is too much starting out. It feels better spreading out this kind of info gradually over time, not all up front right away.
I love the premise a lot, gets right into it too. All the choices matter it seems 👀💦
My only gripe is the MC not having their own appearance, mainly gray floating limbs for a certain scene.
when MC stared at Fraiser's ass, I was surprised there wasn't a full screen art of that scene. seemed like a good visual art fanservice moment, hopefully in a later build they add that o3o
skjold is my instant fav.
The exposition dumps are huge, and don't often feel organic.
at the start, the MC instantly monologues their backstory on the way to the portal. once there, they name drop some friends' names for a bit while starting at the portal which is suppose to have urgency yet continues to reference them. these friends we haven't yet met prior at all to build off of either. I feel like a proper prologue is needed leading up to the portal going haywire. Show the MC at the university with these friends stated earlier for a better set up.
Skjold, I like his mellow and respectful vibe but, he's a walking, talking lore double wide extra thick lore book. every other sentence is spoon feeding various info of the town, rival nations, some laws at the MC right away to someone he just met ever so casually. Explaining something is one thing from a naive question MC has being a fish out of water but dropping a near whole history lesson is another when on their way to his cell. I know he was getting a read for the MC reaction to it but it sure was a lot all at once. I love lore and history dumps, yet gradually over time via environment and yes dialogue, that warrant's a mention for the current situation.
tried to put a certain part of it in italic, but put whole thing as it by mistake then that made all of it huge too. So i reduced the size but it didnt show how small it truly was until after i posted Q.Q
Also too lazy, not editing it :p