Looks great, rules look quite interesting.
Pg. 39, 5A, tension, last line, the lower part of „pg.“ is cut off by the image
looks extremely cool, can’t wait to try it out!
If you are interested there was a typo I found: The igorri Hunter is described as a deadsouls hunter.
i do have a question about the abhorrer soul upgrade „merciful snowdrop cut“: do the stance effects add up, so e.g. in turn 6 it would do 1, then 2, then 3 holy damage or do they replace the previous effect each?
trying to get through the update, great stuff!
Couple of things I noticed:
On p44 it says you get 1 ability/talent each for hitting the 5/10 xp mark. On p15 (character advancement) it says one ap for hitting the 7 xp mark.
The explanation of set up on p19 mentions a boon or increased effect as a result of set up, on p35 it is referred to only give a boon (this might not be relevant as on p35 its only in a bond power explanation section)
Anyway I’m excited for the eventual full release, I think your TTRPG work is some of the most interesting & exciting out there!