trying to get through the update, great stuff!
Couple of things I noticed:
On p44 it says you get 1 ability/talent each for hitting the 5/10 xp mark. On p15 (character advancement) it says one ap for hitting the 7 xp mark.
The explanation of set up on p19 mentions a boon or increased effect as a result of set up, on p35 it is referred to only give a boon (this might not be relevant as on p35 its only in a bond power explanation section)
Anyway I’m excited for the eventual full release, I think your TTRPG work is some of the most interesting & exciting out there!