Sending you lots of love as you work through your healing. Your work is amazing and there's a reason why people keep coming back for more. Your success is measured in your happiness while writing, and the art that is born out of your passion. We'll always be here cheering you on no matter what step you take! You're doing amazingly! :)
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I shared this with another creator but you can also report to Sleepyhart who is making a list of games shadow banned. This is absolutely horrible and I'm so upset and sorry for everyone who has to deal with this. https://bsky.app/profile/sleepyhart.bsky.social/post/3lup5f4dbvc2l
You can also report to Sleepyhart who is making a list of games shadow banned. This is absolutely horrible and I'm so upset and sorry for everyone who has to deal with this. https://bsky.app/profile/sleepyhart.bsky.social/post/3lup5f4dbvc2l
Pronoun coding is definitely hard haha. I'm also learning coding for the first time and trying to make an IF game (which I wont post until I complete the whole game) and it's rough with they/them pronouns and sentence structures. Something that helps is just keeping a list of the coding for all the pronoun variations on the side for reference 😅 at least that's been helping me so far. That being said, I'm only in the beginning stages so I'm sure it'll get harder further in. I wish you luck on your IF journey! And I look forward to seeing more from you! 😊💕
Hellooo! For some reason both of the menu ui's on the top and bottom take up a lot of space and only leave a little bit of space for the text to be seen. It makes it harder to read 😅 This is only when I run it on mobile. I would love if they were collapsable so that the reading experience can be smoother! Thank you so much for this update 🫶🏻💕
;3; My cuties<333 I'm so happy to see Flea slowly allowing himself to become soft and loved. Becoming vulnerable, especially with trauma is so hard and scary. Although I don't have The Detective's particular trauma, it all felt the same as my fight, fight, freeze response for mine. I could also relate to Flea being scared but yearning to be seen by the person they care for as well. As always I love your writing and eagerly look forward to the next one! Definitely take as much time as you need to write and have fun! ^v^
(PS: I love that the menu has Flea in his relaxed appearance)
This is great! I just have a small suggestion, but this is just my opinion, you can take or leave it: I feel that the game would be stronger and more immersive if you use "you/your" instead of "I/my". An example being "Your sister was kidnapped". That way instead of the character feeling separate from the player as if someone else was saying "I", they would feel like it's the player being addressed.
Oooh, Thank you, I'll join your Patreon now! 😊 I definitely want to write sexually explicit IFs. I don't think there are enough sensual IFs in the world and I want there to be more. This is especially true for otome gamers (like me) who are tired of the middle school hand-holding type of romance stories. The lack of adult romances for women vs the abundance for male audiences in dating sims is astounding. IFs are so wonderful because you can choose your pronouns and be immersed in a story with adult age appropriate romance that moves past hand holding and chaste kisses. I want to make a safe space for people to fantasize freely, which is the same space I get from your IF!
As someone who is currently planning on making an IF of my own, what advice do you have for a first-timer? 😅 I haven't started yet but I'm learning coding and I want to be aware of any pitfalls and am open to helpful advice!
Also thank you so much for your hard work! Your IF inspires me to continue to develop my own story as well 🫶🏻
Hello, I found a bug! There is no longer the option to change Mordred's eye color. I kept going back to skim the text to see if I missed anything but no, there is no option. All I can change is my hair and skin color of my Mordred. The only time I can change eye color is if I want to skip to chapter 5 and do the character customization.
I just started playing today and caught up and I'm already soooo hooked 😭💕💕 I'm excited for the next installment!! 🫶🏻 Thank you for this update!
Also one suggestion I have is a slider for text speed! That way we can control how fast text comes in instead of just skipping and potentially fast forwarding over important things!
I really enjoyed this game! I loved the music and the art direction with the pop art/ comic style. The voice acting was also well done, although sometimes I felt like Nik could've had more inflections, but nothing major.
I only have 3 in-depth critiques on things I feel need to be worked on:
So first, I know MC was in a state of panic so they weren't thinking straight, but as someone who is always in the line of danger, they should be calmer than most. So when the MC's mom was attacked, MC should've been suspicious as to how Nik knew that person being attacked was MC's mom when he had never met her, and how he seemingly knew where their apartment was.
Second, I found it odd how MC leaves their mom who has health issues and was just attacked, in their apartment alone in favor of having time with Nik. Knowing how much MC worries about their mom, this was out of character. They should've stayed behind and gently refused Nik's invite to his home, and rescheduled for it.
Thirdly, I wish we were able to choose to drink or not. I'm not someone who drinks and choose not to drink out of health concerns, so I don't like having to drink in a story that I'm trying to immerse myself in as me. This is just my preference though so you can ignore this.
Overall I enjoyed the story and idea and can't wait to see more! :)
