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Thank you so much!

Thank you!

Thank you!!!

I liked the prose, good work!

thank you so much!

Thank you! Still trying to find the sweet spot for pacing in a story so short so I appreciate it! Also the image is what I found on google but I should’ve paid closer attention since I’d didn’t notice the AI aspect of it.

Thank you so much! This comment definitely made my night, so I appreciate it! 

I appreciate it!

Thank you!

Thank you so much 

Thank you!

Thanks for the response! No apologies needed, i agree with you lol. I got too amped to delve into a narrative description that I neglected the labels needed to accurately describe character origins and species which can be pretty necessary when a universe like this is so large and diverse. Definitely something for me to remember next time around. 

I enjoyed the character dynamics 

Very interesting!

Thanks, and I appreciate the feedback. You’re right about the tension. I think if I did a full story dive I’d explore the evolution of the character’s ego and maybe a “fall from grace” style confidence shift and redemption arc. 

An awesome and unique perspective and one I was surprised to find myself cheering for

Loved the twist and creativity of this

Vivid story telling!

Interesting and filled with character!

Definitely a fun and unique read!

Liked the character and personality of this read. 

Nice! Interesting and grimdark. 

Thanks, I appreciate the kind words 

Thanks!

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Thank you!