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I like those sampled style drums, it kinda gives off that Forge/Workshop vibe. I also love the bass work in the song. The melody is also really nice when it enters on, I js think it could be used in a more impactful way. Still really solid submission :)

Really cool take on the theme, this sci-fi/futuristic kinda vibe, you conveyed it really nice with those synths. Tho I have to say that the melody isnt really prominent, like I hear it, its there, it just goes kind of second plan bc of the bass synth and the arps. Still great job!

Cool nostalgic melody and instruments used in ts track! I could see this being used in like an PSX style horror/sandbox game. Like it really nails that nostalgic kinda feel. Tho I cant imagine any weapon in the direct sense, maybe some metaphorical one would fit the track, but yeah eitherwat great job!

It is indeed an epic orchestral piece as you said in the description. The melody is kinda memorable, like if i heard it in game i would definitely have it in my head for a couple days. The only thing is the composition. Like the whole track is kinda a loop, and its not bad its just that there could be some mixup or something to spice it up. Eitherway great job man!

Cool idea and approach, I can hear the melody, I js dont think its really an impactful one. Still good submission!

Really cool piece, nice synths entering later on in the track. Solid submission overall :)

Wow thanks for your reply and opinion :) I was a bit worried that my songs not gonna fit the jam but I imagined the theme in this kinda way, like i dont usually make epic, cinematic orchestral stuff, so I wanted to port this theme into a psychedelic track through the synths, guitars, drums and the lyrics. The problem is that the lyrics are hard to hear, but thats what im gonna work on my next projects :) Im glad that you actually got into the lyrcis and understood this little story/thought :)

This really sounds like a full blown story! Like the whole track progresses through different stages overtime. Good job!

Cool track! I like those trumpets, like it really sounds like theres a battle thats about to start. Good job!

As a whole I think this track is the highest quality ive heard on this jam, but as for melody I dont think its a one thats gonna get stuck in the head. Like the melody itself is cool when it enters later into the track, but its not really impactful. Anyway its still great and as I said I think ts the most polished track ive heard on this jam. Great job!

Crazy synth work at the begining, lovely pads later on and then the calm drums with this heavy bass synth that js the cherry on top. Great job!

Really cool dreamy track at the begining, i like how the drums and the synth melody literally cut through those dreamy synths exactly as in the title, great job man!

Wowwww really good submission man!!!! I love those guitars that work together in the middle of the trackand then this cool little guitar outro. The whole song has a nice build up and a nice end. Good job! (the only thing i could think of is that the melody sometimes isnt rly clear, but other than that ts my favorite submisson on this jam, great job!)

Ok i really like that you went for this cool cinematic kind of vibe, and dont get me wrong i really like the melody,  but there are some weird offbeat parts that idk if they are intentional or not that just dont fit this cinematic and epic kind of style. Like youve captured this "epic" vibe really great its just that the melody kinda goes off-beat, theres nothing wrong with that, i js dont think it suits what u were going for. And also i feel like the transitions between the stages of the track couldve been less harsh. But eitherway u know what u are doing definitely, i love those epic drums. Good submission man!

Good overall submission, i like the chiptune vibes, tho i dont often listen to ts kinda music. There is a cool melody and it actually fits that whole vibe. But i think it kinda gets repetitive over the span of the track. Still great and unique submission, and yeah i love it, great job!

Great submission overall man, the whole track progresses smoothly and yeah its just a banger. Cool melody that carries on thorought it, great job!

Really cool and immersive track, like really ambient and chill, i really like it, tho one thing i gotta say is that the flute is a lil bit too harsh sometimes, still the melody and the overall track is great!!!

Really cool vibes, reminds me of the soundtrack from the game "Lunacid". Good job!

I really like the guitar and also the drums, but i think the guitar tone kinda takes some focus from the drums which should get more, because i can hear them and they are really nice. But eitherway thats just mixing, the melody is pretty cool!

Yeah i think messed up with the whole narrative thingy for this jam, like i added the vocals to kind of compliment the melody, but the melody kinda gets lost thourought the track. Thanks for your comment man, i was aiming for that indie feel :)

Well yeah i might need to work on them lol, i wanted them to sound similar to og tame impala, but then again more work is needed. Thanks for ur comment!

Wowww thanks for this whole opinion! Definitely gonna improve on the composition next time, so it makes more sense, and i agree with u that the theme is kinda lost here lol :) Thanks for the kind words !

Thanks man, ima try doing that on my next tracks!

Very enjoyable piece! I love the guitar part and the overall synthy take on the theme. Great job!

Crazy track man! I love the melody man, like to me its kidna silly, but like in a good way. Drums are also really solid. Very good track overall :)

I love the guitars in this track, the melody sounds really nice. I love how the track intensifies towards the end of the track with the drums entering. Tho my favorite part is definitely this sick guitar outro. Great job man !

I love the melody, it shines especcialy in the first part of the soundtrack (when theres one "main" instrument playing), it kinda gives the track this weird/melancholic/liminal vibe. Idk how to explain it. Then the second part of the track is also great, i just feel that the volume is slightly unbalanced. I had to increase the volume to hear the first part, then the second part kind of jumpscared me. But other than that the whole track is really solid! Great job!

Very cool idea with this distortion sound at the end (around 2 :35). Overall really solid piece, like really tied together. Also the choirs/pads/voices are really cool that appear thourought the track. Great job!

Thanks for the opinion man! Im definitely gonna work on the vocals on my next projects and as for the bitcrusher i used it on two different synth tracks so yeah they can be kinda muddying the whole thing at one point. And as for the cover art, my friend who made it actually loves ultrakill so im sure its some kind of reference, tho idk cuz i havent played. Again thanks for the kind words and the tips!

Thanks man and than you for pointing out what should i work on next, im gonna try and improve those aspects for my next tracks.

Oh my god Tame Impala is favorite artist! It’s cool that you find my track similar to his work, that’s the best compliment I could have received for my music :)

Glad you’ve liked it!

Thanks for the kind words and for pointing out what I should work on next :)

Thanks for the kind words :)

Good job man! Really beautiful and peaceful composition.

Great orchestral composition, love it!

One of the most unique submissions I’ve heard in this jam — it’s really nice.

That build-up around 2:14 is awesome, great work!

Despite being quite experimental it sounds amazing man!