Ok i really like that you went for this cool cinematic kind of vibe, and dont get me wrong i really like the melody, but there are some weird offbeat parts that idk if they are intentional or not that just dont fit this cinematic and epic kind of style. Like youve captured this "epic" vibe really great its just that the melody kinda goes off-beat, theres nothing wrong with that, i js dont think it suits what u were going for. And also i feel like the transitions between the stages of the track couldve been less harsh. But eitherway u know what u are doing definitely, i love those epic drums. Good submission man!