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I need Level 2

Does anyone have the combination for the big sister? Level 2?

You need to get back to the Visual Novel aspect. This game is pure garbage. the first game was awesome.

Really disappointed by this. Voronica Cleans House was such a fun story and this is absolutely ruined by the mini game, sandbox and grind elements. Had I known it was going to be like this, I would not have spend the money on it. I will not make the same mistake again with you. 

You seriously need to put the controls in the game. It is annoying having to wait for the text to scroll and not being able to use quick save and other controls. I refuse to pay for the game or play it without the controls. It is one reason I hate RPGM.

I had dropped the other two games completely. 23 Sisters just got old. It was feeling repetitive. Daddy’s girls? Well I gave up on it very early. It just felt like it was running in pointless circles to me.  This new story “feels” different but I am holding judgement until I see where it goes. I know where I hope the story will go at least. So please make it Loliriffic!!! Anything else would just make in recycle bin material. 

Yes and she "seems" ok. I am not really sure why I am not thrilled by her. She just seems like a distraction in the story to me. I would much rather focus on the other characters than deal with her. I have tried to avoid her as much as possible.  That complaint aside, I still loved the first chapter though! I look forward to the rest of the story, I assure you.

I know this story will be just as fantastic as all of your stories.Trying to keep an open mind about "Suzi" but I dunno.

No and that is why I asked what I did. It makes sense now. Thank You for letting me know. 

Of course you are still looking into it but why even have an account there if they will not allow "Adult Content?" I mean, that is after all, exactly what you develop. I don't like the toxic nature of Discord so I simply avoid it. I prefer to follow your work via your Subscribestar and here. In case I am missing something.... Why are you looking for an alternative to Discord? You do realize that going to another site is going to have a negative effect on your fan base numbers?

It is unfortunate that we live in an age where "perceptions" are so widely skewed. I still can not understand how an "adult" can see one thing as perfectly normal and the other as wrong. To me it is a double standard. Unfortunately, you are forced to play by the rules that people much more powerful than you and I are, set. To keep doing the great work you do and earn a living from it, you will have to play by those rules. Having said that, do not let this setback stop your creativity and vision for the stories you write. I can tell you that those tiny changes will not even be noticed. Anyone beyond that who thinks otherwise, needs to look at themselves in a mirror and ask themselves who the "real" problem is.

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I agree with you Lockheart and my monumental disappointment in the last chapter not withstanding, people should support you by purchasing your content as I always have.

You do realize that any game you "purchase" here means you can download the rest free? You simply log in and go to your "purchases" and click on the game. It will provide you a free link to download any updates.  Seriously. Stop your whining and do the research. 

I have purchased this game as I have all of your games.  I was so excited to read Chapter 5. Then I was so let down by it.  All of this build up and all of the extended dialogue and the actual scene was this mundane deed that seemed to be more like just another play time than anything.

You write in just how "special" Petal wanted that moment to be and you end up handcuffing her and the whole moment becomes more of an experimentation than anything. Where was the passion? Where was the emotion and the intense feelings that go with such a "special" moment?  

You killed the moment and with it, everything the story was leading up to from the moment Petal and Chester entered the cabin. Is this what we are to expect from a "Moment of Bliss"?

What happened Lockheart?  I have bought all of your games and have been a faithful Patreon supporter and I have to say...... The last lewd scene was terrible and not at all what you built it up to be. So sad.  Absolutely nothing special about it. If I were Petal I would have curled up on the corner of the bed and cried my eyes out.

Handcuffs? REALLY? What 18 year old girl would EVER want her first time to be that way?!!!!!

So far I have enjoyed all of your stories. I do not see that changing. What I do NOT want to see changing is you! Critics are critics and you cant please everyone. Close your eyes, take a step back and remember why you "truly" do this. Never do this to please me or us! Do it for your love of the story and stick to it.  

I have faith in you and see great things for you. 

I cant help but ask.  Be honest with yourself.  How would you react if you were in the same situation? 

Don't think like a gamer/reader. Think like the parent of an impressionable young adult woman.

I really do not know how I feel about this turn of events. It has always been my belief that a VN should be the result of the writers expressions and not the cries of the fans. I wonder if the majority of the people complaining about the MC are not yet parents themselves and lack an idea of what a loving parental figure would do in a situation like that.  

My biggest fear now is that all of the "balancing" you are doing will create a muddy situation where it feels like the story will just drag on without either person really doing anything.  More than that though, I really get vested in the stories I like and this is one I have truly enjoyed.  Now I have to go back and try in some way to put my feelings aside and try to forget basically everything that has happened and try to reinvest myself in the new narrative.  

You stand a 50/50 chance of alienating the majority of your readers just to please the minority.  The worst part is if you do not get this rewrite "Right", it will destroy much of your credibility as a writer and turn away the fan base you have now.

As with anything, this is my opinion only.

The MC was well within what a parental figure would be reacting to. If anything, there wasn't enough "emotional tension" created between the MC and Petal.  A parental figure, especially a man would/should be reacting to things more aggressively. We men don't see sex and love the way women do so we would be more rational about what is happening. (As was the MC) Petal on the other hand is acting off of pure emotion and now that steps have been taken towards a serious physical relationship, her emotions will be tied to her physical feelings as well.

So now you are trying to go back and make your MC less cautionary which they would never be and make Petal less aggressive which she is actually more likely not to be. Once a woman puts all of her emotions into a relationship and expresses those feelings physically, there is no toning her down!! You seek to strike more of a "balance" when there is never balance with love, emotions and physical feelings. Balance is subjective. What is right for one is not for another. 

Understanding emotions an physical feelings and how they work together is hard for writers to get right.  The best thing you could have done was stay true to the story you envisioned and let the critics be critics. Its not like there aren't a thousand other VN's out there with similar subject matter.

I think you are a fantastic writer. Keep up the great and do not let critics change your vision of the story you are trying to tell.

Can not wait for the next release.  Oh the wait!!

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I love how you mixed all of the emotions and personalities. The subject matter itself is hard to tell a story about but you pulled it off! I think my only complaint was the ending. Although I realize that the end goal was about Avalon overcoming her trauma, I couldn't help but feel like he ending was rather abrupt. It just left me wanting to see more. I had hoped to see where Eric, Avalon and Dallas (My story arc) would have been down the road. Did Avalon and Eric Marry? Did they have a family? Does Dallas stay with them? Lastly, I liked Avalons hair in the alternate story line much much better than in the main story. She was so much more attractive with her hair down that with it up in that strange braid and short cut.

Please keep turning out the great stories.  I have been following a Petal Among Thorns and I love it so far. I plan to pick up a Penny for your Thoughts very soon.