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I really like what you made here. I love how your game had multiple different endings some good and some bad. That is very similar to the way most choice based video games are setup nowadays for you to choose the ending you desire. I also love how detailed and thorough your narrative was, it was very reminiscent of a who done it movie. I love how you based it off a real case you read some bit ago. I definitely feel that it is engaging. One thing that I could be interesting to include are maybe different passages that act as you finding clues leading you to believe one person over another. Although that will require a lot more work it is something that I believe would only enhance this piece. I think the multiple endings really adds to the amount of player choice. I really love this piece great job!- Gareth Correa 

I really enjoyed your game. I thought that the story was fascinating and very engaging on its own. My favorite part of the game was how you made the option appear after you were able to click to number 7. It was one I wanted to incorporate in my game but I didn't know how. I think one thing that you can add is a passage back to the beginning of the story if you get the option that ends up in your death. Overall, I really like this game good job. -Gareth Correa