I really like what you made here. I love how your game had multiple different endings some good and some bad. That is very similar to the way most choice based video games are setup nowadays for you to choose the ending you desire. I also love how detailed and thorough your narrative was, it was very reminiscent of a who done it movie. I love how you based it off a real case you read some bit ago. I definitely feel that it is engaging. One thing that I could be interesting to include are maybe different passages that act as you finding clues leading you to believe one person over another. Although that will require a lot more work it is something that I believe would only enhance this piece. I think the multiple endings really adds to the amount of player choice. I really love this piece great job!- Gareth Correa