Just finished the demo and thought I'd leave some feedback!
- Unlike the other commentor, I thought the amount of story was pretty perfect, enough to keep me interested, but it wasn't overly hand-holdy or anything, which I like for horror.
- As for some critiques - I found the chase part slightly annoying for a couple reasons - when picking up the pieces of paper, it locks you into that paper animation while you're still being chased? It also locks you into a conversation if you run to the door where you input the name. Being able to back out of that and run would be nice.
- And also the name puzzle took me a good 15 minutes. At first, I wasn't sure if I was looking for a real name, or some weird fantasy name - I was mostly trying to find some logic in the layout, like reading the letters left to right. Once I found the clue with the first two letters, I figured what name it was - but idk if this is an American thing, but I've never seen that named spelled that way. I've only seen it spelled without the H. I tried spelling it so many different ways before I got it. Another clue or two for this wouldn't hurt? But if there were other clues then disregard this, I only saw the first 2 letters.
But those are minor nitpicks - overall I thought this was a very good demo! It reminded me of something like pocket mirror. Beautiful art, I liked the story, definitely looking forward to the full game!